Needs more description on the setting. I have no idea where all this was taking place. It felt a bit weird, nonetheless a pretty neat fic. Although it needs more detail on all the dates~

nice story!! there were alot of grammer errors tho, but i was able to see around them and just enjoy my fav pairing take effect! .

Damn!! This is so good, and cute!! please make more of AlbelXNel fics, they are really cute!

So cute, especially how Albel asked her! And he did it in such a romantic way...XD! You really managed to keep them in character, murmering and being all frustrated like that because he isn't used to romance or emotions! I was readying my boot in case he didn't go through with it! The most suprising thing was how easy it was for him to say yes to Sophia! =D Nel's little chat with Clair was nearly overshadowed by my feeling of- Clair and Roger?! O_o But it's sweet! =D And her thouhts to herself were a nice touch too! Great story!