Pretty interesting thus far. I'm very wary of fanfiction usually but...kudos, you've interpreted my characters splendidly thus far. I'm very impressed. :)

Could I ask, perhaps, that my website (just be included in the disclaimer, please? Just so that people could link to and see where these characters came from in the first place. Much obliged!

Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this, but I'm quite pleased. Looking forward to the next chapter.