hmm this is a cool idea, I like the way you handled the the reasons for it being Albel instead of just some person.

Hey, I'm going through my backlog of unread Star ocean fanfiction, and this is how long it is haha.

Anyway, i'd really like you to update this story, its awesome.

It's been a while since the first chapter, yet, as usual, the second is worth waiting.

This is just the beginning, but I am already glued to this^^; Nice, really nice. Amazing how Albel reacts, he's like a character being pulled out from the game!!

Wonder how he's going to react if he saw the game SO3 playing..

And will be waiting to see the "havoc" that might took place in Rebecca's house. Heh. Keep it up!!

This premise is amazing!

I can't wait to see the real plot. Keep going, have fun, and be original!

*gives ten billion cookies*

I think this will be a really good story. You started out with a strong, well-written prologue, and I hope to see more soon.

Well, everything has a start.. So I'd like you to give it a try^^
Please go ahead, okay? Doesn't matter if it's AU or not, as long as your story involves SO3, I'll stick along^^
(Heheh, sorry about that.)

Quite a short intro, but it's already enough to capture readers' attention. So, continue?

I'm really interested in seeing where this is going! (It's on my alert, so you better continue it. :P) I don't usually go for AU but this sounds very interesting. And it's - hopefully - going to be full of Albel. :3

Your grammar/spelling is also perfect except for one nitpicky thing: "Despite the fact 'he’s' left arm is perfectly useable" I dunno if you want me nitpicking, but I always appreciate it when someone does it for me. Tell me and I'll stop. :P

Anyway, if the prologue's anything to judge by, this is going to be great. ^_^ Like the atmosphere you created here too.

I want to see what Albel does! Is it the REAL Albel Nox?
Nice writing, really thoughtful!