I love love love the way you describe Woodhouse's thinking process. Favorite lines: "The air above Woodhouse turned around and left them alone." and "But the small rushing things had legs, and they stood on the hills. The hills danced."

Woodhouse is now officially my absolute favorite character in this series XD

I know that this is without question a Harry / Draco slash-ish story but, if Harry *were* hetero, I think that Syrinx would have made a fantastic choice for him.

That opinion voiced, on with the show...

I appreciate the slash warnings at the beginning of these chapters. I'm not really a fan of it, but every other aspect of this story has me unable to stop reading.

I'm beyond impressed with the series and your battle scenes are maybe the best I've ever come across in any fan-fic.

More scenes with the Omen Snake, please - I like him!

I like Aurora. She's a good balance between all those idiots with prejudices or their own goals. I really hope she isn't going to turn out to be some madwoman.

Is Falco Parkinson really going to be the Dark Lord? I guess that is the question. I mean I don't get who else could it be save maybe for Harry himself, if such situation came to pass. Maybe a normal wizard could become so powerful, after some extraordinary event. After all, now we know that magic is more flexible than thought..

Oh and how would Falco fit in with the prophecy?

Sorry, too much future speculation.

I'm worry that some of the 'older' characters might be forgotten when there's so many new ones to make get familiar with. We'll see ;)

woahh... this time it took me realy long to get the part finished... but god... it was good... ;o)

Despite that Connor annoys me I think he is right something is wrong with Severus.
I’m happy that Severus fought back and won, Harry would need him.
the Liberator –Indigena Yaxley well it makes sense, she likes Harry and she knew a lot about Falco Parkinson...YOU KILLED RUFUS and it means next and last part without him... :(
Well final chapters were intriguing I feel that last year at school for Harry will not be easy.
Thank you! It was pleasure to read these series you have done great work!

“H-Hawthorn Parkinson.”

“The Death Eater?”

“The mother,”
Harry remembered that he is Slytherin, I love these occasions
I do feel sorry for James and I must say that his punishment is too hard. He was young when his sons were born, it was hard time when he began his family (war and then live isolated), and he loved Lily and he well is weak, it is natural for his character that he didn’t want to see horrible true about Lily so he turned all his attention to Connor and ignored Harry and boy’s suffer. He just wanted pretend that he have perfect family for how long it’s possible.
When come time when his illusion was shattered he of course wanted to save broken pieces. So he ignored again that he was married with cruel fanatic and that his son suffered abuse for years.
In my eyes he doesn’t deserve the same punishment as Lily he never played active a part in Harry’s “training” and he didn’t know about that for very long time.
Severus and Draco and other men close to Harry can be proud of him how he confronted Lily.
These dreams what Severus after doesn’t remember are not good sight, right? Does they somehow will messed-up his memory or sense of reality?
Rufus Scrimgeour is still my most favourite character

Henrietta brought a raspberry pie to Evan. Well done
So Falco is dead now, good. At some points he was crueler than Dumbledore if only because he was smarter than headmaster.
The Dark magic is quite sure that Harry will declare Dark it would be nice but I believe that your Harry never choose to declare.
I’m happy that Lucius escaped (I’m fond of him, you know) especially because I believe what he done to James and Lily was right thing to do. However he betrayed Hawthorn that I can’t excuse.

I always wondered why Harry hasn’t had a pet snake in canon books, I assume because a) he didn’t want to remember to others that he is Parseltongue b) because Voldemort has a pet snake c) he believed that it is dark talent and didn’t want to use it.
Its only benefits your story that you give Harry these smart pet snakes Sylarana and Argutus and of course Many friendship.
When Calibrid Opalline offered herself to Harry believing that Draco is unworthily she not only insulted Draco but also Harry. It like she assumes that Harry are with Draco because he is just pretty **.
Intermissions are wonderful, these ones whose are about Severus dreaming are masterpiece one their one.
Draco is changing! So happy about him and Harry, I really believe that canon Draco could have achieved greatness if someone helped him it is truly sad that canon Harry never give a canon Draco a chance to prove himself. Well prejudices...
Falco deserves die if only because he ruined Harry’s holiday plans.

To destroy the Horcruxes, four people who love you are going to have to die
But Sylarna(?) wasn’t human she was a snake.
I’m so glad that Evan Rosier is back! I love that insane bastard. It would be nice to learn more about his background maybe it could help to understand what drive him to insanity. For now I understand that hi is insane because madness is commune illness in his family like it is for Black family.
I’m so happy about Harry he deserves to live and now he at last understands that he can enjoy his live. Poor Lily she would not be pleased if she knew that her son is recovering from abuse. But she is victim too brainwashed by Albus Dumbledore that of course doesn’t mean that she is less guilty for what she has done. But I think when Harry will destroy Falco Parkinson he will also revenge his mother because Albus used Lily because believed Falco teaching.
I can’t express how much I found interesting to read about house elves and their web and how much I like your explanation why they are so powerful and yet pathetic. The reason why is horrible and so human I can easy imagine how ancient wizards make them slaves. Well done.
I like angry Harry especially how you described him.

At last I recognize Draco Malfoy! That was fun the way he showed to Michael true about himself.
Happy that Harry made next step to healing, good because after each step he comes less annoying.
Why Draco should apologise to Michael? Ok, Draco was flirting with him but it was clear that he means nothing with that. It’s hardly his fault if Michael is naive and assumes that little flirt means something and what Harry things punishing his soon to be spouse? I don’t see what Draco did wrong when he flirted I see why he should apologise to Michael for possessing him and hurting him. Michael should apologise as well for being nosy idiot.
That sex scene what happen after Draco Declared Dark was hot and you made me love “The Sacrifices Arc” series even more letting Draco top Harry. I know that is not important but I cannot pictured Draco as submissive one in relationship with Harry.
Luna is amazing she is one of the exciting characters.
Regulus is back! I was missing him.

My English is not good enough to describe how much Harry’s decision accept monitoring board annoyed me however I understand that it was necessary.
Harry is lucky that he has by his side Draco; he could learn some things from his lover.
Your Ginny is nice girl and I like her that why a lot better than Harry/Draco stories where she is brainless vicious **. But I do not like canon Ginny it shame really that Bellatrix didn’t kill her.
That epilogue was scariest and silliest thing what I have read it almost killed my liking for Harry Potter books well it did until I found fanfiction beautiful world. And authors like you bring my love to Harry Potter back!
Harry and Draco are going back to school! Does Connor apologised to Draco? I think not he considers himself better than Draco. How schoolmates will react to Harry?
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In your story lot of admirable and strong characters are women – Hawthorn and Pansy Parkinson, Narcissa Malfoy, Laura Gloryflower, Henrietta and Elfrida Bulstrode, Lilly Potter, Minerva McGonagall, Indigena Yaxley, Griselda Marchbanks, Aurora Whitestag, Ignifer Apollonis.
Since in literature often most memorable characters are men it is satisfying to read novel in which women are can dictate their one rules and stand by themselves.

Severus is back! It was somehow strange to read how he broke Croaker that reminded for what kind of things he is capable and others ex Death Eaters. He give a nice scare to Unspeakable but I think that Croaker broke to easy. Should he have a good training and be prepared to suffer thought torture?
Ohh...my favourite couple made next step into they intimacy. It was so cute that Harry fell asleep less than few minutes after he was with Draco pleasuring each other.

I like Mrs Malfoy even more after she chooses her son over husband; she is remarkable woman and excellent mother.
I liked that part where Harry saved Peregrine and her two survived werewolves. It was very interesting especially because it was from Remus pov.
Another Black sister Andromeda gets some bigger part of this story, good. I think I can hope that Andromeda will worth her sisters. For now she seems to me not less interesting than Mrs Malfoy and late Mrs LeStrange
As after thought The Liberator...I don’t have slightest clue who is she or he. From which family the Liberator comes? Is he/she truly wants to help are not? Is this will be your created character? In any case I’m sure it will be interesting person.

Malfoy’s domestic violence –that was fascinating part of story. Poor Lucius.:)
And you combined well that part with Harry and co breaking in the Ministry.
My poor Rufus forgot about Draco’s talent. I must say that me too I was thinking that Harry would do something to save his beloved but Draco Malfoy needs no hero!
Hawthorn in the cell, that was very well written and touching. I like her very much she always keeps her head high and is very proud woman but in good why not like Lucius who is too proud for his own good.