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Awesome! Dark and I loved it. xD Well done.

Holy good god woman! Are you trying to steal my angst. What use will you have for me if you keep this up?

But I REALLY liked it though. So dark. Yummy.

YAY! Loved it! It was pretty :3 Just because I sound cool saying pretty. Right? Yesh. Loved the way you put it, instead of the stndard "And it seemed like an eternity had passed, when it was only five seconds" or whatever. That gets annoying... and how specific you were that his hand was on her shoulder--shoulder! It made me giggle. Just because. Yesh... Je suis hyper. Llama.

Hehe, don't you love how you can make something so innocent sound so dirty.
Love it!

OMG - that was so hilarious. I loved the twist at the end... very nice ;) Loved the innudendo

-Ash

Lmao, I love it! Especially how you just built it up to the feeling being... SOMETHING else... And then it turns out to be something completely different! Lol, I'm not usually a fan of MirKag fics, cos, well, I've never liked it much. But I love all of yours!

It just... amused me. A lot. Anyway, keep up the great work, definitely gonna wait for an update!