 Dory 2009-06-02 . chapter 6 I am not stunned that Hawk would do this sort of thing. |
 lebaneseprincessdado 2009-05-30 . chapter 6Nice Chapter!
plz UpDate soon :D |
 Dory 2009-05-29 . chapter 3 Man Axel takes everything so personally. |
 Dory 2009-05-28 . chapter 2 Why did nothing really bad happen to King? |
 Dory 2009-05-27 . chapter 1 I am guessing that Jenny is the thief. |
 Monique 2009-04-30 . chapter 5 This story is just incredible. Go on! |
 lebaneseprincessdado 2008-08-05 . chapter 5hey! i soo like ur story ! keep going !
great story with GREAT chapter!! :D:D:D:D |
 My-name-is-foxglove 2008-03-07 . chapter 4:) Nice story! I really like it and hope you'll update soon. |
 darkangel1992 2008-02-16 . chapter 4Please update! Beg. Plead. Puppy dog eyes. ;D |
 RyeRye-Chann 2006-12-12 . chapter 4I luv it, Please put up more chapters coz i wanna see if shark gets out of the closet and if somethin happens while king is peeing or what happens when Lioness and Axel are all alone ;)
Please do those damn chapters... please? :) |
 MinaLovesMusic 2006-10-16 . chapter 4Cool... I love your use of vocabulary. And the way you tell the story is interesting! Keep up the good work! ^_^
P.S.- Update soon! |
 drakeguard 2006-10-16 . chapter 4I like this story, been meaning to register and review. It's cool, especially the idea of Mr. Lee and his date (*is a big Mr. Lee fan*). |
 Hybryd0 2006-10-15 . chapter 4Poor Shark just walked right into that one. The image of Shark using Hawk to climb up to the window was great. I think you do a really great job of capturing the characters. I can't wait to see where this is going. |
 Lazy Straitjackit. 2006-10-15 . chapter 4 =p Don't worry bout it, mate. Doubt anyone woulda noticed...
Great chappie! |
 Lazy Straitjackit 2006-10-15 . chapter 4 Ooh, yayers! But dammit, you spelled artefact wrong! IT'S ARTEFACT! GAH!
Ahem.
Excellent chapter, you bloody well better carry on soon. =D Please? I love your work! |