XD we pokeballs of death! XP I was playing that game once and I remember getting my pikachu a bazooka of some sort XD

Yay! It was very awesome. i'm gunna go read the sequel!

just to let you know you made a small mistake in this chapter right before danny and mr.lancer hang up you say the "14 year old" and it should be "15". just thought i'd let you know! by the way great story (stories)!
Mia ( )

o. that was awsome! did u get eclipse's name from those books? that was really cool. i dont think i'll read the one on lancer's POV though.

~~Dannyluvr58~~

First Question: Soy sauce... Yeah that's right, pure soy sauce from the bottle! I don't know why. Ever since that time i haven't had many cravings for foods period. But it was just weird to be sitting in the middle of homeroom and suddenly want to drink soy sauce!!

The second question... i don't know, I can't even think of something cheap I've broken other than a pencil.

Most expensive thing I ever broke... a glass, handmade piece of artwork, worth a couple hunderd dollars (possibly even thousands). No need to tell you that my parents weren't too happy about it.

Note to self: never play football/soccer when indoors. It wrecks your allowance, and your parents will be PO'ed for a very long time.

Pretty good ending. Nice action scenes.

Keep the good writing.

XD I love the jokes in this story, they're awsome!!

Keep on writing, I wanna know what happens!

Nice to see it from Danny's POV and get some more insights into the story.

For *Mysteries* I suggest Mr. Lancer's POV, with Danny coming in a close second. As for "I No Ur Secret," will that one turn out 'slash' or just a regular mystery? Geez and I thought my muses were weird! See you in the sequel!

Live long and prosper!

I: Deranged and perverted rodent! Thats funny! hope u continue asap! :) ;) :P ;P :D ;D *_* ^_^ &_& $_$ MONEY! ;p >_< ._.
(Myself: Money?!?!? were, wErE, WERE?!?!?!?)

[Me: nice. crazy freek]

{I: sence they decided to come out now I would like u to meet Me, and Myself and BTW I'm I theses are my three(including
I) personalities I'm the main one.}

(Myself: *eye twiches* ya the REALY BOSSY ONE!)

{I: ya because I have to take care of U and HER ones CRAZY AND HYPPER always and the other is EVIL!! thats why i'm alittle bossy.} *they continue to fight*

[Me: O... K... While there continuing to fight I will Take oner the world! *eavil laphter* and tell u continue asap!]:P

I thought I told you to get rid of that thing?! This is what the third time your bed has been set on fire?! It is totally destructive and considering that it belongs to you not safe in your hands. Now mine on the other hand that is a totally different story. In my hands it would be safe and I wouldn't use it on anyone... at least not anyone important. I can't promise what I might do to my brother. Ok no on to the actual story I don't really have anything new to say about the fic considering I have said it all before when I read in on the bus. But I will say that it was amazing and I am sad it is over.

Great chapter, I enjoyed it. See ya next time!

AWESOMENESS! Only thing I caught wa that you spelt loosing not losing. I kow it looks weird, but it's how it's spelled (I make that mistake often). Can't wait till the sequel.

Vote: Myesteries



i feel a tear a comin'.=] so sad to see such a great story end... oh well. they cant last for ever. well if they did i would probably lose interest sooner or later.=]



great chapter, and i hope to read your work again soon!=]

for the last time on this story...

the elephants stole my weed.