Is it sad that I still wait for another chapter after 3 years of waiting?

I love your writing and wish you would continue. <3

~A fan

Why is this chapter called sandcastles collapsing? I don't get it...

And I like it when Naruto's exasperated. I think I'm sadistic. >_<

You are one of the best SasuNaru authors EVER. I am utterly amazed by how you managed to keep the characters' personalities intact in an AU fic. I especially love Sasuke and Naruto's relationship here; it's incredibly similar to their relationship in the anime. I love it. ^^

Please~ update soon!

Pelase update soon?

this is getting really interesting i do hope you continue the story.

Wow, simply genius. I love this story, I think it captures their relationship very well and its completely in character as a plus. Please continue, I definetely would love to read more whenever you get the chance to update! :)

I love how the kisses don't initiate romance like I originally thought, but a tentative realationship... they just start beginning to understand each other through this bet. Its quite clever. I especially felt the ending to chapter 5 was well done- really don't know how to describe it excecpt that it felt right. Even through all the differences Sasuke and Naruto still have the similarities, starting with the fact that they are both human. Very well done.

And might I say a nice balance of entertainment and romancce and angst/drama and action.. well thought out! I wish I could write something like this, but truth be told I would probably get to impatient in building up the relationship and skip straight to the fluffyness. lolol But you can do it, and you're great at it, so more power to ya!! XD

Wow, even if you don't update for another two years I would definetely come back and read more if you decided to, and I'm certain alot of others would too. For that reason, I'm favoriting. This is seriously one of the best SasuNaru/NaruSasu fics I've read. And let me tell you, I've read hundreds of one-shots and multi-chaptered and this one DEFINEELY 100% stands out as one of the best. Infact, the fact that I'm taking time to review proves that, because normally I don't, I just read.

Anywho, I could babble on forever, but my point is, I love this fic and please update eventually! I will wait patiently... err... not? :D

To be honest, from the summary I expected a typical (not very good) fanfic that quickly had them overwhelmed by lust-oh-wait-this-is-actually-gushy-love. Obviously I will read that, since I opened this story anyway, but it's not my favorite.

THIS, on the other hand... It's truly excellent. You have done an amazing job with all the characters - every last one, every last detail, EXCELLENT. It seems like you've taken everything into account and built an amazing, captivating story out of it. So thank you. And I sincerely hope you update soon.

It would be good if you updated this :) It's a really nice story

Brilliant! More please :)

AH!
PLEASE! PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
oh, and by the way, wonderfully done. :)

I...am in awe. Seriously. A beautiful fic, very much worth reading. It took up and enjoyable 4 hours of my life. I have only a single question, and that is: are you considering side pairings in this fic?

Dude, it's so...I don't know. It's hard to describe. The dynamic between Sasuke and Naruto is confusing, constantly shifting. I find it kind of daunting that they are so skilled in psychological warfare, so to speak. Sasuke is very...possessive(?) toward Naruto, and he seems a bit bipolar.

Oh boy...I usually don't read Naruto fanfictions (unless they're crossovers with Inuyasha) because I know very little about the series...but on occasion I will read a SasuNaru fic...and yours is just wonderful...the characters are so deep and real...the relationships twisted and complicated...it's great! I love it!

since this story has not been updated in over two years, I am safe to guess that, unfortunately, this has been abandoned? I shudder to think that because I absolutely love this fic. I have read it long before, but only the first three chapters. And now i have finally found it (been searching for quite a while) and reading the last two chapters, I'm still deeply attached with your story.

The characters and emotions you've put in are just wonderful and beautiful.

Again, although it has been two years since you've updated, i just wanted to say thank you for sharing this piece of work because it seriously made my day. :]

Hurry and update! I want to know what happens next! 0.0 Don't make me wait, please? *puppy eyes*