i am enjoying this story so far. i have not posted yet due to being entranced by the plot line. i like it

LOve it!

OMG i LOVE IT!

I love this story its so well written i defiantly think you should write a sequel to it i know you were probably wanting to end it there but i would love to hear how you would progress this story further.

Isabella Rose

Honestly I think that Draco is out of character in this chapter, simply because I believe he would still be shaken by the death of Dumbledore. I don't think Draco was every truely evil just a very shaded gray.

This story was an amzing read! :D i couldnt stop reading it, my parents had to tear my computer from me to get me to get off! This is definitely how the seventh book should've gone, you had all the characters true to their person, and your writing was amazing! It was interesting and made me want to read more. H/Hr is my fav ship along with Ron/Luna and D/G, and you wrote these ships marvelously! :3 Great work!

now i rember why i stopped reading this last time, it is to drawn out and not enough action to hold intrest i suggest you learn plot lines and breakaway points this is just a big yaw n

ah, irony. how i love thee! snape telling someone their ego is large... oh! nice one!

HHR! HHR! YAY!

I haven't finished the chapter, maybe I'm right, maybe I'm wrong, but...LOCKET! IT SAYS LOCKET!

This story is brilliant! Are you JKR in disguise? No, wait, you're BETTER!

Some 4 1/2hours after starting I have now finished your story *whew* :D. First off I will state that I am H/Hr shipper... And please read my whole review before taking any offense or otherwise.

It was a story that was to me was hovering somewhere on the scale between great and brilliant (but certainly nearer the brilliant end) and occasionally bordering into unforgettable. To me this was mainly the cause of two things...
1) the story often seemed to 'drift' off. I found it very hard to keep going with the story either because I was confused or just simply bored (this leads onto the next point though it's not your fault for trying to make a HBP compatible storyline)
2) But the whole fact of everything between R/Hr... The only thing I can say to this is "how many times can you kick a dog before they stop remaining loyal to you??" It just seemed to me that Hermione was just too OOC (mind you my ship isn't canon after all... damn you JKR), but it seems that the relationship between RHr was too forced (possibly cause you ship HHr as well??)

Saying this I would rate your book 'excellent but not quite unforgettable'.. (mind you, I can't wrote a story to save my soul, so for that alone i praise you :D) Also after reading your profile, if your looking for some excellent HP stories (cause you can't exactly read yours now can you :P) I would recommend most stories on but especially http://fanfiction./story/3914 (H.P and the Lions of Gryffindor by madscientist) and also http://fanfiction./story/6586 ( Vox Corporis by MissAnnThropic)
Finally if you ever start to write another HP story and were after a beta etc. I would be more to happy to help

*takes a breath and steps off his high horse* :D
Andrew -

I usually don't review until I have read enough content to evaluate. So far it is a good story, wonderful use of words, spelling is good and it is spiced with humor which always lends to reading enjoyment. Keep up the good work

Omg
That Was..

Amazing!
Your Such A Talented Writer
I Think The 7th Book Shouldnt Of Ended Up Like This One
Except
Draco Shouldnt Die

i usually don't review between chapters, but the final confrontation between George and Ginny was just so touching, they were simple but they managed to make me get tears (no kidding). awesome job up so far