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| The Wing Alchemist 2008-08-11 ch 44,  | abuseLove it! I love the part about Kratos' outfit! That was absolutely brilliant! I died laughing! keep up the awesomeness! |
| nohaydeque 2008-08-11 ch 44, | abuseHonestly, I gave up on the beginning a few times before I finally read this one all the way through. (I think the only reason I managed to get past the first few chapters was the fact that I'd seen so many people who love it, so I figured it must have improved a hell of a lot. And it did.) ...Though that plot twist was smooth, I must admit. Really, I think I prefer twists that come out of nowhere... things I can't predict. It makes things all the more interesting. And keep up the humor, please. :) You're good at it, why not flaunt it a little? -nohaydeque- |
| little-pocketmouse 2008-08-09 ch 44, | abusei laughed so hard when i read this chapter! keep up the great work :) |
| kratos's appreintice 2008-08-09 ch 44, | abusei think people who wanna sprout wings and fly in the sky just wanna be free, at least, thats my reason. just to fly in the sky, no worries, no fears, who wouldnt want that? and the world needs more tomboys like you and some of the other girls on the site and me, instead of stuckup snobby prissy preps. anyway, Gj, and very interesting. keep it up. |
| Silvan Arrow 2008-08-05 ch 44, | abuseHehehehe...now I'm wondering why the game just didn't let you fly over and open the door in the sewers! And that was so funny how Kratos didn't like Zelos near Lloyd. Update soon please! |
| Toyax 2008-08-05 ch 44, | abuseThat was so funny! You have to update again soon! It's SO FUNNY! Please update soon! |
| Convulsus Animus 2008-08-01 ch 44, | abuse“We had wild sex under the coffee table,” HAHAHAHAHAHA!THAT WAS MY FAV PART.AND YES,I REALIZE I HAVE MY CAP LOCK ON.XD Llya |
| mandrakefunnyjuice 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseSmack that Zelos! Yeah! :D |
| The Digital Dimension 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseDER PWNED REGAL! |
| Tri-Emperor of The Twilight 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseYou know this story could easily have a Kingdom Hearts sequel detailing Jaela's journey home. |
| Dr Forster 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseNicely done chapter but arent we getting to "mature content" :3 Joking aside another awesome chapter. I totaly agree on the flying thing cause so many levels would be easier with it but you have to follow tradition. Cant wait to see what other changes your madness will create:3 |
| AnimeCrazy88 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseAwesome chapter! Update soon! |
| Sn0w Ang3l 2008-07-31 ch 44, | abuseMy favorite chapter so far. lol She acts just like me; I love it. |
| Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2008-07-30 ch 44, | abuse*rolling around on the floor laughing* That was just freaking awesome. I was laughing through the whole thing. I love it and please update soon. I look forward to more! |
| Rushingriver 2008-07-30 ch 44, | abuseHey awesome chapter that is funny I like the bit with the spider! Update soon if you get the chance! ~Rushingriver |