Reviews for A Twisted Fairytale or Leaving Kai

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shadowphoenix101 2008-04-13 ch 7,	abuseMy god, i never know where your going to go with your storys, i think i do but i so totally get proved wrong time and time again. Man Kai is a little wacky, ok scratch that a tad wacky. Has he been smoking some wacky tabacky? Lol sorry ignore that. i don't know what to make of this chapter,
Amanita Virosa-Amaranthus- 2008-04-02 ch 7,	abuseKyu!! I feel sorry for Julia, yes, but also for Kai! kyu...Please update soon!
dong-chun-mei 2008-03-18 ch 7,	abuseOkay I'm popping open the review box before I even start reading. YAYS! And guess what? I turned 17.. so you didn't update before then BUT ANYWAYS! I'm going to review as I read. Why? Because I feel like it and I can. I'm just THAT damn awesome... Like Lamb is. huggles her tightly T.T She's not going back?! NOES NOES NOES NOES NOES cries in emo corner And she's sleeping about like a slut! O.O i just called my all time fae character a slut! GAH! T.T... Then again, Mystel, Oliver (I'm personally convinced his gay, or at least bisexual...) AND Garland... She didn't do to bad for herself. I know if I was animated, i'd do them... I think she's starting to regret her decision of leaving. She SO misses him, and that faery-tale bed apparently... Taller? Richer? Smarter?! SEXIER?! SEXIER THAN KAI?! HAE YOU LOST YOUR MIND WOMAN?! pants from lack of air after outburst NO ONE! I repeat... NO ONE is sexier than KAI!... but let Julia continue to kid herself, she ain't fooling anyone... right? KANE! OMFG! Tap that ass before you go back to Kai! He's a fine one! LOL... sorry... fangirl moment... Man, she's a popular girl isn't she? Aww.. Kai called... that's so swe- HOLD THE PHONE not litterally KAI ACTUALLY CALLED?! THE Kai Hiwatari swallowed his pride long enough to actually CALL?! DDAANNGG! He must really love her if he did that! squeals like a rabid fangirl Wow.. i LOVE the scenery you discribed! It's amazing, i can't picture it! XD Naked women?! Okay... WAS SO NOT expecting that one... but it got my giggling lol! Wow... just wow... The discription about the spirits... I could picture that so clearly. Not a lot of detail but the way you worded it, i could see it so plainly as I read it. Like I was the open walking through them and not Julia... XD The dang cat! Kai had a fetesh for cats, i'm SURE of that! Though my cousin has a cat just like Zorion, so I actually really like Zorion. E! squeals until the window break YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES... i think you get the idea... THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER! YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! er... eh heh heh... Aww.. it was so sappy and romantic. The kiss the embrance... sighs O.O... She... She actually TOLD HIM?! That she slept with all those other men?! No wonder he reacted that way!... Can you actually blame him?! o.O.. I think she's right, he's a little crazy, but how can you blame him considering his paturnity?! DON'T RUN FROM HIM JULIA! HE LOVES YOU! NOES! cries in an emo corner Damn you Lamb! I did NOT see this coming! Why?! Why?! Why?! Wh- rants for an hour... ... I love it! LOL DCM
Iluvbeyblade 2007-10-18 ch 6,	abuseYou are so mad, my Stormy. But if you know where you're going now, YAY! I'll look forward to an update! Agh, that dream will be significant, won't it? Green eyes and all. Hehehe, this chap reminded me way too much of Tpitp! As usual, emotions were BRILLIANT (but oh boy, does it remind me of my baby ficcy ...) Looking forward to an update! With more Kai! Oh, make him sleep with Mimi because she gets rid of the feeling of vulnerability inside him! ^.^ Talk soon, love you! x Squishy x
Amanita Virosa-Amaranthus- 2007-10-05 ch 6,	abuseKYU!! Kai! Please update soon!
allie oops 2007-10-04 ch 6,	abuseI am so glad you decided to finish this. Even if it is taking a new direction, it is always better to complete a project. I can't wait to see what happens next. They will get back together-- right?
shadowphoenix101 2007-10-04 ch 6,	abuseglares and sits on muse...again alright now that that is him taking care of... Hm...Short, too short...Lol sorry im a tad hyper while yes it was short i guess that it is better then nothing, nods Poor Kai...Needing her when she wasnt there, it was his fault after all...Wait? im so lost i cant memba if it was his fault shes gone or not...hm Anywoo, 'What are you looking at bitch!”' That made me laugh for some reason i dunno i guess the sight of a 7 year old Kai yelling at a little girl like that yea ok i dont know why that made me laugh im just really weird. But that you already knew. Right ok the dream...Weird really weird someone with the same eyes as Julia...Hm weird...Lol Ok well i hope that you dont lose track of this and can finish it, i would love to see how it turns out seeing as you said its different then how it was going to be... Hmm ok luv you Nix
dong-chun-mei 2007-10-04 ch 6,	abuseStarts hyperventalating OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG! I just about fell through the floor when I loged-in when I got home from school and found my FAVOURITE fanfiction updated for the first time in almost a YEAR! OMFG! I'm so glad you didn't discontinue this, I love it do DAMN much! huggles Lamb Thank-you so much for giving this another shot! YAY Happy dance Right off the pat the discription of Kai is amazing! I can close my eyes and picture his smexy form shift on the bed as he sleeps... Is there anything hotter?! giddy giggle And then we come to the dream sequence... Anya? Hmm... She seems to be your normal little green eyes girll... but If I know anything about your writing style, she may make another appearance before this story is complete... Or she could just be a thing of Kai's dream and not come back into the story at all. It's hard to tell with you most of the time, that's why I enjoy reading your stories so much lamb! ^-^ glomps story What happened so Kai-kun's neck?! Was it that evil Boris again? Or Voltaire?! I seriously want to kill those two! Er.. yeah SO off topic... Eh heh heh heh... ANYWAYS LOL I'm wondering if Anya had more in common with Julia than just her eyes... You never offered up any more information on this little girl... So I'm wondering if maybe Anya is realted to Julia somehow.. or maybe she is Julia? DA-DA-DA random thunder clash Yeah right! I'm totally over thinking things again aren't I? XD T.T... He wakes up and she's not there T.T That's so depressing! Don't worry Kai! You can cuddle with me.. or Dranzer... Whichever works lol! O.O... He got sick?! That feels a little random to me, but somehow you'll work it into the story. You always seem to work in little details like that... I just hope he's not getting really sick, and I really hope it's not a side effect from his parents being siblings... shudder Well... at least now he's sleeping peacefully... I wonder what he's going to do with himself without Julia... He doesn't seem to handle himself very will without her. T.T I hope they end up back together, but I'll still love this story just as much if they don't. I mean who doesn't love a good blubber fest at the end of a ficy? I know I sure do! Can't wait for the next chapter (wonder if it'll come before I turn 17 lol) DCM
mikaera 2006-11-01 ch 5,	abuseAt last!! I had a problem with my account, something happened so i couldn't send you a review from my own user. That's why you found my name on another reviewer; i asked Erikka to do that for me, and write a review with my name. Whatever, your story is really good, and i hope you update soon!! I love itt!! And it's one of the gratest lemmons i've ever read. See u!! update soon pleasee!! now yes, Mikaera.
Amanita Virosa-Amaranthus- 2006-10-25 ch 5,	abusegood chappie. Update soon please ^.^
Angel of a Broken Soul 2006-10-24 ch 5,	abuseLOVED IT SO MUCH! HOPE YOU UPDATE SON! I want to know the other Oliver.. umm.. T... a... why do these letters sound so familiar?? Kay, see ya update soon! mikaera.
dong-chun-mei 2006-10-17 ch 5,	abuseE! You actually dediated your story to me?! I can't believe it!! This is asome. It's my fvorite story written by my favorite author and you dedicated it to me!! YAY!! I totally hated the concept of this chapter, but i loved it too! It's beautifully written! I absolutly love all you writing!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Julia and Kai get back together soon! Their so my favorite couple and this story makes me love them even more! LOL I totally hate Julia with Mystel he seems for fakey... like one of those overly pink baribe doll. shudders now i'm going to have nightmares... LOL Keep up the dream work
Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-10-13 ch 5,	abuseThe best lemon I've ever read!
Violeteyes92 2006-10-13 ch 5,	abuseYay you updated! Lately, I've been I bit slack with FF, and I only check the FF's that really stick with me. Yours is one of them. Thanks for the recognition, it's always nice to get shown in a fanfic. I liked every inch of that chappie, can't wait for the next one!
Iluvbeyblade 2006-10-12 ch 5,	abuseWow. Mystel. drools Ha ha, good-looking but useless in bed! Poor Julia! hugs Julia You're writing loads at the mo!! envyenvyenvyenvy Anyway, I loved this chapter! Oliver, as in from the Majestics? Oh, now that'll be interesting! ^.^ Please update as soon as you can! goes back to re-read and spots cookies Ooh, cookies!! grabs cookies Yum! ^.^ Talk soon, update soon too!

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