That was like... a lime? Or citrus? Whatever, I don't get why they call it fruit :3
Anyways, I lurved it! >D

Aww...please finish this. I love this story ^^

i like it ^_^ if you stil need someone for that community i wouldn't mind, just reply and i'll try to help as much as i can. you said you were in grade 8 (now yuou probably older since this story is pretty old) what age is that? i can't really oriëntate it

o plz go on ^^

that was a good story... i know this was like a year ago and all and your probably in gr.9 now (im in gr.8) and i was like 'wow i thought you were goin to do a lemon, i ould never bee able to write somethin like that' but then you didnt and i was fine then... but great story!! oh yea! i was wondering if i could draw a picture of there first kiss and submt it on deviantart? im drawing it this very minute but i was just wondering if i have your permision to put it one the internet since your the one that gave me the idea...so please respond and go on my prfile page for my deviantart link thing and such...but yea... great story! GAARAHINA FOREVA!!

omfg i love this story^.^

ah! y did u hav to discontnue it! oh well, it is still an actually pretty good ending. cant wait till mor! luv it vry much! by mor i mean othr strs since u discontinued. butz oh well.


=Moon Fire

oh my! you're so good! totally love it. It's okay if you didn't complete the lemon. let the readers imagine xD I did. well then. it was so wonderful.
I LOVE GAARA!
I LOVE HINATA!
I LOVE THEM TOGETHER *-*
please update soon if you wish to continue the story.

Whoa...that is good story, I would like to read more please!

i have a question why did you discontinue a great story i couldn't stop reading my eyes were glued to the story every word & every detail was simply amazing please reconsider

Hey. I was just wondering if you were going to add more to this. if you are...Yay!

great story, you kept the charicters in charicter well

Why'd you stop writing the story?It was getting so good.I mean you were going along so well.Iwaited for the next chapter and it never came!T.T. Why'd you stop?

Its cute so far and I like the idea I have one slight correction to make Gaara-sama has green emerald eyes not blue just thought that might need to be corrected alright happy writing

... I have nothing to say... Its a good story and all but that last chapter ending has made me speechless.