i want more. nobody writes seriously about chiriko-chan anymore, and this is so sad and well written. poor kid :(

Nice going, I really liked this. (Am I just a perv? Be honest.) Poor little, kawaii boy...and his pervy oni-san...
I like your writing style, keep it up. More? Sure! Onegai. ^_^

You must continue!! I cant stand the thought of Chiriko having such a past, but this fic has got me so intrigued! Please email me when new chapters come up! JA

Ohhhh yes! I for one, know I definately want another chapter! That was so sad, I felt like crying but I couldn't. Write a sequel, please, you have to! No one writes enough Chiriko fics...::sniffles:: but they should!
You're very talented by the way. I'll definately come back to read more, so please, please please keep going! Doukun didn't seem OOC at all! You did a great job... maybe the next chapter could boost it up to NC-17?

MORE!!! (sorry if it seems weird cuz of the penname, but i just signed out of my FY one. ^^;;) I like this fanfic, i dunno why, poor Chiriko though!!! Please email me when this fanfic is updated

Kyra-chan..... Do you even read your reviews? (Gah) I'm still wondering about the next two parts to this fic... (I KNOW I saw them on your site... they were just broken links) Can you PLEASE (pretty please with caramel covered Tasuki on top) post them? *puppy eyes*

i dunno how long ago this was posted... but i was browing through the FY fics and stumbled upon it!
that was... good... but sick... if you know what i mean... i agree with Neko no KO! when i say that Chiriko never talks about his past that it is probably is dark... well even though it was twisted i wanna read more. so you should UPDATE!!!!!!! UPDAAAAAATEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! >

that was....disterbing. but good, a disterbing sort of good............i confuse myself

IYA!!! EVIL ONII-SAN!!!!!!! *attacks him with a singed blender* I always had some weird Idea that poor Chiriko-san was raped as a small child, but...*by his brother...*shudders and curls into the fetal position, crying* HOW SAD!!!!

Okay, this is AniDragon again, but I had to review this again now that I've watched FY. (Took me long enough to review, I've been watching it since this summer!) Anyway, I was on your site when it was still up, and saw that there were two more chapters to this, but they were broken links. Now that your site's temporaraly(sp?) down, I don't suppose you'd post those chapters here, would you? Just wondering. Ja ne no da!

...Oh my god... This was really good... I think that because Chiriko never talks about his past life, everyone always assumes that he had a good one, but this... Totally different. I like it! Please continue!

This is an odd story but has is very suspensful and i NEED to find out what happense. So please please finish it. Any story with Chiriko is worth reading!

Nope! Its getting good here and Chiriko doesnt seem THAT outta character! I always wanted 2 read a fic that was sorta angsty about him! R u gonna continue? I wanna know what happens! How will the others react if they DO find out?!
*grin* PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
thanx
later/ja ne
----Kurai Koganei4

*shudders* That was really dark, and sad, and angsty. But then, I suppose it was meant to be. (o^.^o) You should write more, and I hope to see some more chapters to this! Hope to see some soon
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I really, really like this one... And an angsty deep fic about Chiriko... They are rare. Sequel! Please! :D