Beautiful. I love it. This is one of my top favorite Big-O stories.

Hi Serena!

Great job on the story, nothing to be nervous about! Very well written. I recently started watching Big O and I love Roger and Dorothy together. Keep writing more! Both of them were in character! Great job!

Bravo!

Lily

Great stuff. Love the descriptions; Precise, true to the characters and insightful 0:o)

I like it

As always, very nice..I can just see him walking up to the piano and giving that little "Hm?" when he finds her asleep...

It was very simple and beautiful at the same time, you should be proud. I know I would ;) We kind of share the same fears don't we?

Pretty good! A little boring in the middle, though.

I enjoyed this...good angle on the reason he wears gloves.

It's a very deep story.

Girl you are great. it is that simple.

I really liked this story. I like taping in the mind of Dorothy. We take the simple thing of the human touch. It makes me want to examine my hands and be thankful for them. I've always wonder why Roger wears those gloves. Two big's up from me. *_*v

They say (or at least I do) to make a good author, you need someone with the vast imagination to observe simple objects from a different perspective - one not too common, at times. Your story has much meaning and is VERY well-done! You seem to have a great grasp on the Big O characters. I look forward to seeing more of you work.

I never ever gave a second thought to Roger's gloves until just now. And thus I feel a fool for never considering how distant they can make a person. Your stories open my eyes to such important things that I always take for granted. Thank you. Keep writing; I will faithfully review your stories, because I feel privileged to read them.

i love this one!