_ Great fic! All the characters were in character, too

XD please write more Atelier Iris fics! XD

How come Atelier Iris is so little known, Anyway?

its even less known than fricken Klonoa...XD

I'm stuck at the Flawless Marvel! TT

Bravo, good work...

ha.. Ateiler Iris huh? I played that game before although I got irritated with mull with killing all my chars within 2 turns, damn that was a waste of my time, after I lost 10 out of 10 I set on an epic journey to level up and find some ingredients for synthesis,

and yes you've geussed right I never get to use ANY of the mana stones ever since I started playing, I thought they were for extracting... pretty handy stones

about the story, it was good, writing would be better if you continued on

I really really really hate when klein dies first during battle, I mean I dont have a clue how to resurrect the other people if they fall rolling

Main Objective: Finish game

Second Objective: make that damn astral cane

Third objective: Use mana stones for once

Fourth objective: I wish I could beat up beggur again

Fifth Objective: Talk to puni god

Sixth Objective: Trying to find that bloody time mana

Seventh Objective: Level 99 bwahahahaha

that was a great fic

Hey!

You story is good! you should write more _

greetz Rennie

Mashu: "Eh... sometimes I pity Veola, but I eventually remember that in the grand scheme of things, she's a plot device for Klein and Lita's rocky (and stubborn) relationship. This was very well written, though... and I hated the darn Empusa! Took me ages to kill her!"

Cynic: "Lessee... select... delete... heh."

Mashu: "What are you doing..."

(Mashu's Atelier Iris save file vanishes in front of his eyes)

Mashu: "AH!"

Cynic: "Heh heh..."