That was excellent! And can I just say that I loved his response. I am SO GLAD he didn't "respond positively" right then, because that would be highly inappropriate for a teacher. So YAY for being proper! :)

That was great! Loved it. :)

Very sweet and inventive ^_^

Absolutely genius!great story!

Oh, how nice. This story is a find!

hahahahah. that was too funny

Haha, very cute!~

cute!

Loved it! I agree with everyone who says you should add more chpts!

hee hee how cute

oh that is so cute! Are u gonna continue it?

please continue to write on this story! I loved it and there are many directions you could go in from here, but if you need an idea or two, don't hesitate to e-mail me.. great work!

That was so cute! A very orignal way to force such a confession.

That's funny! I liked it!

I love this! It's well written, interesting, and I love Severus response. Wonderful job!