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JoeBob1379
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Love it :)
slytherinlion.o9
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
aaww... that was sweet
^_^
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Aw!

Can I just aw?

This is so cute-- I ussually don't have the patience for drabbles but this one was so good!!
indianpipe
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Just found this, very good. You have made him so much the way I think he is intended to be in the books, and all in a few lines. Bravo
anya
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Very well done.
whitehound
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Like coaxing a scared cat out from under the wardrobe!
notwritten
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Very good.
PallasField
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
This is a really cute one-shot, especially the last sentence. You are very good at writing.

(BTW, I really am so, so sorry about that other review I made in your other story (evalationsRay), as I actually meant to send it to another fanfiction (I go absolutely crazy with all these tabs in Firefox,) and it is currently 11 o'clock at night here, so I am (understandably) a bit sleepy. I mistook the review for the other story as the one I wanted to send to you. So I'll just say that you can write VERY well :). Once again, I am very, very sorry. )
SangoSnape
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Aw cute (= Great Job
Elena
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Well done :-)
Droxy
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
nice little hurt-comfort fic
Shameful Joy
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
I liked this, well done! :)
Bits1212
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Cute story. Accurate character portrayal.
Winter Solstice1
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Another great little piece, I love the way you've captured a few little moments and filled them with such intensity. The short-sentence/paragraph style is not easy, either, and yet you've handled that beautifully too :)
m4severus
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
I enjoyed it very much.
It's wonderful as it is, but I would like to read more :) I'm sure you can write some equally enjoyable next chapters :)
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