 JoeBob1379 2009-09-23 . chapter 1Love it :) |
 slytherinlion.o9 2008-11-21 . chapter 1aaww... that was sweet |
 ^_^ 2006-08-17 . chapter 1 Aw!
Can I just aw?
This is so cute-- I ussually don't have the patience for drabbles but this one was so good!! |
 indianpipe 2006-07-16 . chapter 1Just found this, very good. You have made him so much the way I think he is intended to be in the books, and all in a few lines. Bravo |
 anya 2006-06-29 . chapter 1 Very well done. |
 whitehound 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Like coaxing a scared cat out from under the wardrobe! |
 notwritten 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Very good. |
 PallasField 2006-06-29 . chapter 1This is a really cute one-shot, especially the last sentence. You are very good at writing.
(BTW, I really am so, so sorry about that other review I made in your other story (evalationsRay), as I actually meant to send it to another fanfiction (I go absolutely crazy with all these tabs in Firefox,) and it is currently 11 o'clock at night here, so I am (understandably) a bit sleepy. I mistook the review for the other story as the one I wanted to send to you. So I'll just say that you can write VERY well :). Once again, I am very, very sorry. ) |
 SangoSnape 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Aw cute (= Great Job |
 Elena 2006-06-29 . chapter 1 Well done :-) |
 Droxy 2006-06-29 . chapter 1nice little hurt-comfort fic |
 Shameful Joy 2006-06-29 . chapter 1I liked this, well done! :) |
 Bits1212 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Cute story. Accurate character portrayal. |
 Winter Solstice1 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Another great little piece, I love the way you've captured a few little moments and filled them with such intensity. The short-sentence/paragraph style is not easy, either, and yet you've handled that beautifully too :) |
 m4severus 2006-06-29 . chapter 1I enjoyed it very much.
It's wonderful as it is, but I would like to read more :) I'm sure you can write some equally enjoyable next chapters :) |