aww I love Royai-they work so well together :) good poem and I really like how you wrote it in Tagalog and English!

Wow, that was adorable! Though when I read the tagalog part first, I felt dumb for not knowing my first language.

wow. this is the first time that i've seen a filipino fic here... sobrang nakakatuwa... keep up the good work dear! :D

wahhh! mahal ko tlga ang ROY and RIZA pairing!cute ng poem mo..

naks naman! hehehe xD

keep up the good work o

Wow...that poem fits Royai so well...Though I don't understand Philipino at all,the english was good enough. Keep up the good work...Hail Royai :D

its better english mahina ko sa filipino e :D

Wow, that poem was AWESOME! Although, I like the Tagalog better and ang galing mo, alam mo pala kung anong nasa puso ni Riza! Keep up the good work and I hope you'll continue to write poems and fa fics! :)

Grabe... ang ganda todo! Kakakilig... Although the Filipino version was a little hard to understand it was all in all GOOD! :D ": Good Job! :)

thats a good one!

by the looks of it..

Are u a Filipino who grew up abroad?

if so then ur work is forgivable..

i think the engLish translation is a bit better. But i did enjoy reading the tagalog..

Nice job!

That was sweet... ang ganda kaya... kung ako nakarinig niyan baka nabaliw ako hehehe... anyway I'm Filipino but it made more sense in the translation... i can speak it but not easily understand it... mejo slow siguro hehehe

cool, I'm glad you included an English translation_ anyway it was a pretty good poem. good job.

Ang nag-iisang tagalog fic dito sa FMA section hahaha. Ang ganda ng ginawa mo. Mas maka"WOW" talaga pakinggan ang "mahal kita" kaysa "I love u". GO PINOY! Peace Out

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wow... Pinoy ka pala... Love the poem... i'm a filipino yet i can't speak filipino fluently... how shamful... i'm a cebuana... heheheh..

O, A TAGALOG POEM!

...I like this. Tell Artemis this is very fitting and intriguing.

xoxo, Pat.

P.S. Thanks for the review!