wow beautiful story~ but juz a tad short *sad* you know~I agree with Alchemygirl89 VERY MUCH! I've finally found someone who's juz like me! *touched*(I'm not the only sadistic one,haha) why is it that riza's the one who always dies in Royai fanfics?! I wanna se more royai fanfics that ROY dies NOT RIZA! *pushes fist into air* yay~ may more royai fanfics with roy dying appear! *expectantly* (asks roy: am i sadistic? I'm not, right? roy? *pokes him*...hmm~maybe i should write a royai fanfic myself where roy dies~*thoughtfully* hmm...)

Nice and tragic, just the way I like it lol. It's better writing about Roy's death because it's easier to capture a woman, riza's, emotions.

w00t royai deathfic! i thought the seconds thing was a little odd though. but you are a good writer.

*cries* Wa! Roy is dead! Then again, I have to say ITS ABOUT TIME! Thank you! I hate to admit it, but there aren't enough fics where Roy dies. Maybe I'll start working on one myself... Great fic!

haha i loved it! poor Roy...i wrote a song fic where Roy dies, he doesn't die right in front of Riza but he dies...idk its really hard to kill him off...actually its hard to kill both of them off Riza and Roy just rock. Love the title...great work

you're evil! oh, you're evil! why do either of them have to die? the story is awesome, i adore it to pieces, but... they're both too cool to die!

so sad I love it

This is.. so heartwrenching!!

Your writing style is awesome, it's soothing to the ear-er, eye. This story is short and sweet.. or should I say sad? ='(

Please keep writing!

ZOMG! I LOVED IT! The fic, not Roy dying, cuz i don't have anything against him... It was so sad. I have noticed that Riza is dying WAY to much in fics. Thanks for somethin different! Riza Rules!

That was beautiful. It captured the emotions well. I could almost hear 'Bratja' playing in my head as that was going on. It was very sweet and my compliments extend to you.

Yay! Roy FINALLY died! Dont take this the wrong way, but I like Riza better than Roy xD. So yeah...and my bestfriend is bent of murdering him...so yeah :D

that was heat breaking!

but It's better when roy dies... really...

it's more emotional...

loverly fic! I adored it! really, really awesome! I loved it!

How can you be happy Roy died! I am now about to cry(I'll kill the next person who says I'm a sap!). That was good, brilliant, amazing. What can I say, I'm touched.
Aly

Aw. That was awesome. -frees it from ice-

LIKE IT ROCKS. It's really moody in a good way that it should give moods becuase then it's just amazingly emotional which it is. Hm. So beautiful. Go Roy!

...your author's note at the end killed the atmosphere.

But it's still a great fic. i like the imagery, the emotions... overwhelming. although, im still not partial to dying messages (especially those that declare love), it was very effective.

Very nice story. i loved it. :)