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Lady Emzebel
2009-12-10 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Luffy. It really would suck not being able to swim in the sea. And then wherever else he tries to swim, he needs an inflatable ring of some description.

Still, it certainly makes for some pretty LuNa doesn't it? *wiggles happily*

Banzai!
L.E
GreenCyberWolf
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Awe Kawaii! Such a sweet moment between Nami and Luffy.
Kyla45
2007-01-27 . chapter 1
that was wonderful! Love it! Please write more LuNa fluff, it's so hard to find good fic about them. I also agree with you that this is the only pairing I can stand. There is nothing else. Alright, good job!
Rio Grande
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Very nice - i never thought of a swimming pool, I guess simply because they're never mentioned in the OP universe... but you're right, they must exist. haha i have no idea where this review is going, that was just a really sweet short fic. Luffy was a bit OOC at times, but at others he was perfect - maybe a bit less melodrama at the beginning? keep writing.
Rose Beloved
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
AWW!
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