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Chocolate Pudding1 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot!
Mindy 2006-10-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood writing! But freaky in a way, captivating. If you could, could you at least write one more chapter where maybe Cindy jostles him out of his weird stage or something? I know what you were trying to do but it might be good just to have something small happen, to end the story on a good note. I like it! Your a very tallented writer. If you finished this story people would read the rest. And it might be fun to have Cindy jostle him out of his wierd stage unexpectadly or somthing. Great job! I love it!
SporkWoman 2006-08-04 ch 1,	abusethat was dark. well-written, but dark. i like
a really random reviewer 2006-07-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseconsidering all of the fluffy, typical, love-sick sappy stories that i am about ready to puke from in the jimmy neutron community, i think you have added a better sense of the genius's psyche than anyone else in this fandom (so far as i have read). i hate to have it left at this state as it seems as broken as jimmy's mind itself. but if pursued farther, it might be turned into one of those romance stories. anyways... good job!
Crossover Fiend 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, I am amazed at how well you portray the mind of Jimmy Neutron; chaotic and ordered, concise and vague, focused and expansive all at the same time. But that is not the main point of this story, rather it is this particular line and the implications that come with it: "Mad people generally believe themselves to be completely in control of their faculties; it takes a measure of sanity to realize your own insanity" Not only is that true in the 'real' sense, but everything before and after the line solidifies it to such an extent that I almost feel sorry for how the boy descends into himself (note: almost) I also enjoyed how, although the reactions of his friends and family were apparant, the story focused squarely on Jimmy and how HE changes
Sk8er765 2006-07-08 ch 1,	abusegreat fic but what the hell is wrong with jimmy?
badwolf1 2006-07-01 ch 1,	abuse"Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!" A stunning piece of work, is there no limit to your brilliance?
retroville9 2006-06-30 ch 1,	abuseWow, amazing chapter. - puts on alert list -
greg9570 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseThis story clearly defines the insecurities that Cindy possess along with Jimmy's potential for suffuse anger. I am also impressed with the consistent structure of the story from beginning to end. You were able to create a reasonable balance of dialogue and explanation, which is something your predecessors, for the most part, failed at. Every good story requires this certain balance, and you found it. Right now, it's two o clock in the morning, and I'm wiped, so I'm completely dazed even when writing it. Let's cut to the chase- it's a great story, as usual, and I hope to see many more from you.
Sly Cooper 2006-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewow just wow! excellent story! I really love all your stories. This was so bittersweet. You did a really good job showing how Jimmy would be if he was really like that. Again excellent story!
cassi mo 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseOh man. All I have to say is, wow. I really enjoy your work as a whole, but this one is definitely a masterpiece. I don't even know what to say about it. It was perfectly explained, and your vocabulary conveyed Jimmy's superior intellect without making the reader need a dictionary for everything. Or at least I understood everything. God. This had to be one of the best oneshots I have ever read. And believe me, I have read A LOT of oneshots. -Cassi
qwerty-kitties 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseThis could be a cautionary tale about the importance of human companionship, especially for those intellectual types. Jimmy might actually be heading in this direction if his friends don't drag him kicking and screaming from his lab once in a while. Very nicely done. :)
threadbare 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseExcellent. It almost made me cry.
Mikii Daughter of Azonia 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseOh. My Gosh. This is a REALLY good story. I admire your talent and creativity, and if Greg gives you a review, ya better get a good one! If you don't, flame the heck outta him. Review my story! Buh-bye! -Rinnya of Texas
acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! Wonderful view of how Jimmy would be without his feelings. Certainly, this shows how much the boy needs his friends and family to keep his sanity. Keep the good writing.

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