Meredith's not a **... She may be a little lusty but she in no way deserves to be called a **. especially by the man that loves her. he did call her a ** once, which was completely wrong and I hated it but he didnt seriously mean it. I am not flaming I just dont see him referring to her as a "** **"... but it is your story and I have urges to write stuff like this all the time. I just am a MerDer fan and I dont know if this is the best opinion for the story, maybe a Derek's POV, But I dont know cause I am on Meredith's side... So overall good job, I enjoyed it! Seriously, you are a strong writer.

_Bree_

brilliant. loved it!

Wow. That was very impressive. The emotion behind everything seemed so real.

Wow that was great please post more soon.
Tanya

ahh god oneshot! i loved it.
i kind of like to see derek out of character.. of course i love the loving derek :) who doesn't. but idk. just a different look, a change of things is interesting..
good job!

"One night you felt badly, so you went down on him, like you were still in high school."

Hahaha! Poor Meredith. I liked this. It's disturbingly good.

omg...i don't know what to say...i feel bad for mer...and addie! well done though! you did a gr8 job!

The insight into Meredith is great. Derek is a little out of character though. We're supposed to believe this is the woman he loves. I seriously couldn't picture him calling her a ** ** during sex. Especially when he saw how ** off calling her one to begin with made her. He wouldn't be getting laid. Good one shot though.

Very interesting and great writing!! I really enjoyed it and hope you continue!

It was really good...but i really hope that doesn't happen on the show lol can't wait for more stories from you :)

oh wow. that was brilliant. pure brilliance.