I love how Edward still loves her! hahahaha!

I really enjoyed this. And while the chapters were a bit short, the whole part where Kim became younger once stepping through the gate was my favorite aspect. An interesting twist if I must say so myself! Not to mention, they are together again!

I really liked the story. Fluff.

cute:D

- ella & MGria

I loved your story.I have seen Edward again.This time I'm staying with him.I love him so much!

It is a sweet thing you have propelled yourself to write. I too had the feeling that their relationship shouldn't have ended the way it did. It is wishful thinking to hope that Edward would finally get his hands and be able to hold Kim, and if you had to write it in a story, you would have probably given up even before you had started. But you write with an imagination that makes it seem possible, plausible even! Many kudo's to you!! I loved it.

It is indeed a truly magical thing, love... Write more! ^_^

The ultra-long awaited review!

In the second paragraph, the one with the fireplace and mantle, I am thinking it would be a great spot for establishment of character/time, for example 'Kim scans each of them, lingering only briefly on images of her parents, long passed away, before her gaze moved eagerly on to the next picture, only to be disappointed again.'
That is just off the top of my head, but it seems like a good spot for this sort of thing: Establishing that she is old, has family history and a background, but that isn't what she yearns for.

I would also switch the position of the 3rd and 4th paragraph/sentences, so that looking out the window happens after she wistfully voices her desire. Adjust the 5th accordingly, so it doesn't look out of place.

The first 'to' in the 6th paragraph should be a 'too' :P

Add more description to the 7th paragraph: she sat there thinking of him. Of what in particular? In what situations?

In all of these you have a good story and framework built up, you just need to push the decription. For example when she dances: I want to know how she dances; in graceful patterns to the tune of the snowflakes? With joyous abandon? The heavier the snowfall the lighter her movements?

In that same vein, when the lovely clipped bushes are covered in snow, what do they look like? Are they 'as if ready to spring to life at the first sign of thaw'? 'made more real by the heavy glistening coats put upon them'?

This whole story reminds me somewhat of Wendy-lady in 'Hook', aged and aging while Peter Pan never does (go see it if you haven't yet!), or of the scene in Titanic where the old Rose remember Jack as he was (watch those movies, and try to write down the sort of feelings you get when you see those two scenes, they will be helpful in adding description to the last paragraph).

i like it but...that was it? she goes up there, the end? I NEED MORE! hahaha. also, if it wre 60 years before, she'd be 88. with a little granddaughter? highly unlikely.

I'll tell you what i think!...write more! You didn't have to end this...aw! The'yre meant for each other...*sniff* so tuching...short but sweet...get your lazy butt up to write more...whoahahah! *gets whacked by a plank* Awesome work! God bless you!

Quickly! Update! I can't stand the suspense! You go Kim! Go Kimmy! Excitednes! Help! Faster! LOL! GBU dude!

I like this chapter, very tense and suspenful. Keep going, I can't wait to find out what happens when they see each other.

He does have a thing for ice scultures..poor Edward...yeah those memories sux but its been years..oh continue...short yet sweet...SWEET! Its a good thing i watched the movie...well if it wasnt for you i wouldn't be able to understand this..thankies! God bless dude!

Great chapter, although I wish it was longer. Please carry on, I can't wait till Chappie 3.

yay i loved it. Continue!

I like it can you update please? ^^