Why did Susan bandage Edmund? The cordial should have cured him completely.

I'm glad you had Peter drag Edmund along to apologize for breaking the window. It always bothered me the way they ran and hid in the movie. It was very out of character compared to the children in the books.

I just love the ''You're dismissed.'' It was so funny I couldn't stop laughing for a while out loud while trying to muffle it so people didn't look at me strange.

I'll miss that Lion.

I love Aslan's wisdom. Every time I hear it, I wanna hug him.

loved it:x:X

i lost one of my friends too recently... i can relate. nice story so far though. makes u think about the war right now.

Hi Pip thank you so much for the reply and the great advice! I did what you said and it worked thank you so much.

Elise

P.S. write me at:

Well, that was quite the epic. I suppose it was best read chapter by chapter, as you wrote it, as opposed to a massive binge such as that which I have just experienced. Either way though, Increadible story, and I can't wait to read the sequel.

Dear Pip I Love your story It's awsome. I need your help though did you have any trouble joining fanfic? I have tried joining but I never recived any email telling me how to acsess my acount. I have even tried to email someone to help me I never receved anything back even after looking in my junk mail.So seeing your a fellow Christian I thought that you might be able to help me.If you have any advice please eamail me back soon at . Hope to hear from you soon.

Elise

This is a very good story. Nice technique used in chapters 37 and 38.

I've been enjoying this story immensely from the beginning to now and will be completing it some time soon but I just have to say something. How on earth did you get eight years? Someone else might have mentioned it before but based on C.S Lewis' timeline, they all spent about 14 years (Narnia time from years 10-1014) in Narnia before returning to their world. I find this a bit annoying with all your mentions of eight years because the difference between eight and 14 is rather substantial. Take Lucy for example: eight years brings her to 16 and 14 brings her to 22 and there will definitely be a maturity difference between a 16 and a 22 year old. Anyway, this isn't really a criticism as rather a heads up and I hope you won't take it as such.

NO NOT THE WEREWOLVES! Okay, here is my 2nd review for your entire epic: IT WAS WONDERFUL! I loved it. I thought it was pretty well written and all, but there is always room for improvement, right? You may think that it is more of a chore to read 68 chapters, but I loved every minute of it! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Thanks ~ The Grey Phantom

I am only halfway through your story and all, but I have decided that I need to review now rather than waiting for the end! I think that you have done a wonderful job (so far) at this... re-newal of C.S. Lewis masterpiece! I think some of your dialog for Aslan is out of place though... Would the... allegory (which Lewis said he wasn't) of Christ speak sarcastically?

Simply lovely!! I finished reading this about a half an hour ago, then started the sequel, then realized I never reviewed the last chapter!! =O

Anyways, loved the fic, read the entire thing in one night, and now...!

I will go to bed. it is 3:54 in the morning, and I am tired. Looking forward to an update on The Return!! =D

Stay amazing!

~Aniu