Brillantly haunting.

All your efforts really did pay off. This story is a jewel in both plot and writing.

This story is simply amazing.
Your style of writting brings out all the emotions an individual can feel and puts them together to create a piece of writting that is beautiful. Your writting has become something that I truly admire.

this was amazing!
well done :D

Wow, I thought this was very well done. You captured that dreadful and disquieting downward spiral that can happen when good intentions go awry and suddenly (not really suddenly, more like a slippery slope) any horrific means are used to justify an end. Unfortunately we see this happen in real life - I'm glad you had her stop the insanity. I'm also glad the spell went wrong so that he had the opportunity for rebirth. Thanks for ending on a note of redemption for these two painfully flawed individuals rather than anguish (I could see it going either way!)

wow,

I thought it was amazing how malfoy and hermione lost it, because it's so realistic. i love reading fiction, because i find it so exciting! But what makes fiction great, is when it is believabe, and it doesn't even feel like you're reading a bunch of made up stories.
completely unique! thank you.

*sob* this was amazingly beautiful.

no words.

Xx

Wow...I don't think words can express how incredible this is...I mean this is just amazing...your writing skill is so phenomenal that you've created a really powerful story, I mean my chest actually gives a little squeeze if I even think about this story, let alone read it. What I found really amazing was that you have managed to create a relationship, or connection between Malfoy and Hermione that's more powerful than any love, sexual or friendship relationships I've ever read for these two. And I don't think I've ever read a story with a 'traitor' Hermione portrayed so differently and effectively. This story is groundbreaking! Congrats on being so innovative ^_^!

wow... it was so dramatic :)

this was so incredily beautifully written. it took me an hour to read, but it was so completely worth it. amazing job.

xDRUMLiNE

This took me about two hours or more to read, and it was worth it. I've got a headache, but it's worth it. I am so glad that I read this fic, it's so different and tragic and wonderful.
Thank you for giving fanfiction a truly amazing peice of art, like I think this fic is.
You said this was one of the hardest things you've written. I'm grateful that you wrote it. It's easy to abandon a fic/novel so you deserve cred.
Thank you.

Simply amazing

i don't usually read one shot fanfics...but this... i didn;t even realize that i wasn't hitting next every so often. this is one of the mpst amazing dmhg stories i've read. i'm usually into smut and all that glorious happy ever after stuff, but i can't stress it enough to you how interesting this was for me. well it is 1:25 AM and I need to be at work in 4 hours. thank you for the lack of sleep.

Beautiful. An absolutely gorgeous piece of writing; the pain, the chaos, the love and betrayal--they all blended perfectly in this little jewel. Congratulations.

wow. I am speechless. This story is amazing, at least that's all that comes to mind:D. You really did an amzing job at explaining the characters, and the way you wrote the story with mini flashbacks intergrated with the dialogue. BRAVO!! This really broke my heart, but yet it was so enthralling and fantastic. I didn't think that Hermione could be that ruthless. Ok, enough of me fawning over you jk lol:D...I'm going to go and read your other stories now. I truly love this story . After I finished reading this story I just sat here for like a minute, not even moving, I was just totally and fully stunned and speechless. Once again Congratulations. Keep writing .
peace and luve,
janie