I really wish to see more. It's not often you see Clark/OC pairings. Especially the evil ones.

The story's original, which is a plus. I have no idea if Night Sky is your character, or a Superman comic character.

A word of advice, though. If you're updating really fast, you can keep the chapters short. But if it's a few weeks, or a month or two, in-between chapters, perhaps you should make the chapters slightly longer. I'm not talking about 10,0 words. Around 20 or so words, at least.

Note: If you want to find out info on Superman, you could go to and search Superman, or Superman Returns. You'll be surprised at the wealth of info you can get there.

I found it hilarious that she's so open about the fact that she's a freeloader, lol.

Hey, thanks for reading and reviewing my one-shot! :-D

I love that your story is original...so many of the Superman stories are variations on the same plot, but this is different. Way to go!

Metropolis is spelled correctly, but Lois shouldn't have a 'u' in it. There are a couple of other little things. As you could tell from the typos in my story, I know how easy it is to miss mistake in one's own work! If you're looking for someone to proofread (or beta or whatever fanfic people call it), let me know...I love doing that kind of thing.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this! I hope Night Sky has a fascinating background:-)

Not bad, tho I wonder what you plan to do with Night Sky/whatever her heroine name is now, and Clark works at the Daily Planet. Go pick up a Superman comic or google or see the Superman Returns movie. :)