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Charmedfam
2008-06-18
ch 8,
abuseYou did a nice job. Those two are wonderful togethere and I'm glad that Piper understood.
hannah
2008-06-17
ch 8, anon.
abusei liked it
heavennoseven
2008-06-06
ch 6,
abusenice chap
heavennoseven
2008-06-06
ch 7,
abuseyou better update soon
Anonomous
2008-01-13
ch 7, anon.
abuseHi, I'm Lydia, but when reveiwing I go by Kat. I is an abbreviation of my middle name.
I like your story, I've read it multiple times, hoping for an update, but nothing. You asked for ideas, and I am here to give you some, in the hopes that one of my favorite stories can finally be updated.
I think you have a great start, but I can't see it going anywhere. It all moved to fast.
Maybe you should just focus on how Paige and Phoebe feel with their two eldest sisters married off. Maybe show how they feel with the social scene, and romance etc.

-Kat
Writingtriq
2007-08-27
ch 7,
abusemaybe doing something about what happens when they come back like move in together
WhitelighterLeo21
2007-07-25
ch 7,
abuseis this going to be updated? i really love this story, so please please please update!


-piperleoforever21-
revinder
2007-07-14
ch 7,
abuseCan u please write some more of piper and leo fanfiction so i can read them thanks
WhitelighterLeo21
2007-06-25
ch 6,
abusethat was great and so romantic. i like the whole why he loved her thing. it is so sweet! update please!
WhitelighterLeo21
2007-06-22
ch 5,
abusei am begging you...please update! this story is great and i love it. i love the whole spying thing. it is cute. i also love the idea of a double wedding. So this way both phoebe and paige could be maides of honor. one sister for each. great work and keep it up!
-piperleoforever21
princessde
2006-10-07
ch 4,
abuseomg i absolutly lovce this story...update soon
Kayleigh
2006-08-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseCan u write some more of piper and leo fan fictions so i can read them thank u very much because i enjoy them thanks
PiperandLeoFan101
2006-07-29
ch 5,
abusewell double wedding? I think taht you can make that work really well I mean they both proably want somthing different they can end up having a huge fight about it or soemthing. update soon
heather1021
2006-07-29
ch 5,
abusethat's awesome!! keep writing!
XxTalented-x-CheesexX
2006-07-29
ch 5,
abusegreat chapter. its so sweet that theyre both getting married, and that they all get on so well. i could tell you now, that id never have a double wedding with my sister! lol.
update soon!
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