oh...
heheheh
read ur profile...i left one of those wham-bam-thank u reviews...so ANOTHER!

I like how u made sora a horney freak lol... i was laughing the whole time...or grinning like and idiot.
Axel has ADD! lol...light up like a ** christmas tree...
Soo...this make me laugh as much as it was sexy..

I didnt know u were a guy! disapointing gays ROFL.
(um, you can still have the kiss from the last review if u want it i guess) So, yea! I loved it and thought that it was funny and sexy. The only thing I might say is develop the relationship more...they seemed like they weren't that close in the beginning...just, uh, lusting after each other, and then at the end there was ILY's...but other than that, THIS WAS KICK **!
(better review? XD)

-Jojobeans93

OMFG!
*kisses you*
AWESOME!
idc if u left out the good stuff XD.
the prelude to it was hawt enough!
lol
but yea...good job!

-jojobeans93

Jeeze you said not to read it...
i didnt and after the summary had to write a review,
no flames for a friend tho.

wow, i really liked this . i hope you update it soon, though it's been a while ^^; heh . awesome story you've got going here

No lemon?
*Cries.*

OMG! this is so beautiful! ur story is one of my favorites so far! ur writing is so HAWT! (lol) anyway i hope u can continue soon because i wanna see if sora's mom finds out and i want to see what they do at camp...it will so darn interesting...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! i wanna read more!

Niice...I like it..I hope you'll update soon ^.^

-chanting- I WANT LEMON I WANT LEMON! and pocky ^_^ good story... sorry i didn't mention that in my last review i was crushed a bit from not getting my dose of lemony yaoi today ^_^;

CURSE YOU! TT-TT... i was looking forward to the lemon part... WAH FOUL TEMPTRESS!

*grin*
Oh. My. God. A spanish-speaking boy who writes yaoi. Where the hell were you when I was growing up? AND you're straight. Geez, honestly, are all the decent straight guys where you live? *shakes head*
Anyway...that was a lovely bit of smut-tacularness there man. The words '** you' have never amused me so much in context before. Poor Sora, he should know no one can win against the smex that is Riku. ^_^ Oh well, hurry up and write the next one...I can't wait to see what they get up to at Camp.

...and your Axel is hilariously **-ish with a side of ADD. Good job. XD

Aww, they're always so cute! You absolutely must write more soon, I want to see how things turn out. XD Because we all know Sora's mom's bound to find out.

wow, great chapter i was wondering if you could please also upload the unedited version on fanart central cuz my laptop isnt working properly with various websites. :D UPDATE SOON

Oh God, oh god, oh god, this is ** HOT! Please make the next chapter nice and smutty!! It's good to see guys writting this stuff! *hugz* Can't wait for more Riku X Sora smex!! ^_^

It was a good chapter but I don't think lemon is banned after all baisically every story in the M romance rating has it. Just warn it has it.

nice chap! hope you can update soon