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Reviews For: Gather the Moon

NutBuster
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. I didnt notice that it was Venus, or the person who contains these memories, who was showing the memory. I thought it was just part of the story. Did you intend it this way? ^^;

Ah, but I am slow sometimes, and I have to reread something to understand. Lol.

It was pretty angsty, and that brought out more of the feeling of the story. It was ... like a bittersweet. Hehe.

Even though it looked like a pretty short oneshot, I really liked it. Keep up the great work.
Dragonkiri
2006-06-30
ch 1,
abuseLovely melancholy piece. Thanks for writing it!
GB Keeper
2006-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it. It's full of angst and the story just flows.
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