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| NutBuster 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. I didnt notice that it was Venus, or the person who contains these memories, who was showing the memory. I thought it was just part of the story. Did you intend it this way? ^^; Ah, but I am slow sometimes, and I have to reread something to understand. Lol. It was pretty angsty, and that brought out more of the feeling of the story. It was ... like a bittersweet. Hehe. Even though it looked like a pretty short oneshot, I really liked it. Keep up the great work. |
| Dragonkiri 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseLovely melancholy piece. Thanks for writing it! |
| GB Keeper 2006-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it. It's full of angst and the story just flows. |