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| Beginings And Endings 2006-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseA well made romance story putting the reader in Dr. Wier's seat in surprising love with her second in command (I couldn't remember his full name). Short, but good. Let me know the title of the second halfand, maybe, make it a little more detailed and longer toward the end. Thanks |
| Darkwing333 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is an amazing story. I really love it. I love all those things you are makeing Elizabeth think, it is all just so well written!! I hope you write more stories! |
| Myriadragon 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Very interesting. I like it a lot, and the use of second person is an unusual chioce. What made you pick it? I actually really like the way it works here (probably because I identify a lot with Elizabeth). It's a little fuzzy about the details, but that works fairly well too. The subtle hint of Sparky is a nice touch. |
| jollygoauld 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow poetic rather than just a story. well done |
| Whirlwind421 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is an awsome story! I do hope you write a follow up on this story! |
| sqwrath 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was really well written! Great Job :-D |
| Alipeeps 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseNice. Pretty powerful stuff. Thought-provoking and emotional. |
| Izzles 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abusereally powerful and emotional - very very good. |
| Sepik 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was eerie. Well written, too. |
| flowk 2006-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent...and deserves a sequel. |