Awesome! I agre with most of the reviews, i loved the way you make peter even more vulnerable than he was in the movie.

Great job. I really enjoyed it.

Great fic! I liked how you made Peter seem more vulnerable, because in the movie, and other fics, he seems to be fearless. Great job!

That was GREAT! I love the whole premise of the story. I mean, Peter looked confident at the coronation, but who's to say he wasn't totally freaked out? After all, he's only human. I like how you kept him that way--human--and how Avra said that Narnia didn't need a fearless king--only one who could overcome his fears for the sake of the country. Anyway, again, very good, and cute ending!

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga :-)

What an adorable little ficcy! You handled Peter v. well; it was one of the best characterizations I've seen yet, even though it was short. Well written and good job!

I liked it!

That was good. I liked it. You write very well. I would say you should continue, but you probably like it better as a one-part story. Maybe a sequel?
lol. Well, keep up the good work!

I usually don't read one-shots, but the summary really pulled me in! Good Job!