What a great story. Original in plot, with great characterization. Good action also.

Great story. So sad what Moffitt had to do but I loved the interaction between Moffitt and Tully throughout and especially in the final barroom scene.

I love all of your stories. I too am a firm Moffit fan, though I like all the boys. Please keep up the good work!

I see you're still writing - been a long time, lady. Please feel free to drop an email to the address above (afbrat at timsnyder dot net, in case it doesn't show). I hope things are going great for you. As always, your writing is wonderful, m'dear!

Being a long time fan of the Rat Patrol, I enjoyed your story very much. My favourite character was always Tully and you brought him to life for me again. Thank you very much - it was a joy to read. If you write more - I'll be the first in line to read it! Good job!

Nicely done! This was very well written and a great story for fans of Moffitt and Tully. Unfortunately for me, there's not enough Hitch--who was my favorite character--to keep me interested. Oh well...at least it's great to see some Rat Patrol fanfiction--finally!

Nicely written...would have made a great episode for the show!

So very well done! This one was like reading out a narrative version of one of the episodes. I felt you held utterly true to the tv show in style and format of this 'episode'.

Syl--Your stories just get better and better! I loved the lines: There is no such thing as bravery. There are only degrees of fear. I am really enjoying your portrayal of the relationship between Moffit and Tully also. A great read! Claudia