Good but there are a few mistakes.

haha cute but corny! i love it!

aww.. that's really nice. I'm glad that Oliver got to come visit her in the hospital! I never would have thought about that! Good story!

skysong

I liked it, I didn't find it corny. Just a bit off at the moments on a few parts, but I still liked it! :D

Hey there great authoress in the making!

Well, although at times I doubt your intelligence, as I am sure you are aware, I'm back online now. I went to the other site adn hacked into your account to see how you were going but there were two...and neither had story. that could cuase a few problems for readers. Does the site just take ages to load or somthing? Hm. Hope to hear from you soon!

Nut2

I love and together!

Happy writing,

Katie

Oh, you posted it! Nice work! /high fives all round/ And before you pick up the nearest bludgening instrument and storm over here, I haven't read it...yet. :D Still, your authors note provides a concern for me 'I have never written for Harry Potter before'. Are you trying to make me take all the blame for our other little...project? I can tell you, if that's the case it'll be off this site before I can sart my evil laughter.

Well, I'm glad you finished/posted it. Hm, look at the lengths I have to go to communicate with you so you can hear my threatning. /sigh/ You're not an easy victim these days.

Talk later...s...i...no, I can't say it.

Nut2 ;p

Aww...This is so cute! Oliver and his babbling is so adorable. He was SO cute in the movies too! haha. But thats off the subject. You wrote this very well! I hope to see more of you! Read my fic if you feel like it. I don't know what pairs you support but anyway the title is Remembering to Live. Just if you feel like it. Thanks for a wonderful story! *hugs* emmy

AW! I loved it! It was well written, un-rushed romance, and a realistic plot line! I always thought those two had a thing for one another XP