Just a quick question; Do you have something against turtles?

Other than that, this story is really nice.

I have no idea how to describe my feelings on this story.

I don't know if I enjoyed reading it. Not really, for the most part. But I don't feel like I was supposed to enjoy reading it. I'd feel a bit sick if I enjoyed that. But it was beautiful despite that. It is just such a blunt slap of reality that it's left me partially dazed and stuck with a mental thought process identical to it's writing style.

I was good for me to read. Valuable. Keep up the good work.

It's 2:26am in the morning and I just finished reading your fic. I'm sorry I cannot say more because I am so tired but so happy at the same time, but I hope you will understand when I say this is 'fucking amazing'. This fic is just 'fucking amazing'.

I read this several years ago and just finished rereading it recently. This remains to be one of my favorite Akuroku fics because the narrative is simply amazing. Total stream of ass-kicking consciousness. You write 1st PP like no one's business, and the entire story was witty and entertaining from start to finish. Sadly, it seems like you've already left ff.net for quite some time, but thankfully your stories are still here for us all to enjoy.

I'll be rereading One for the Band next, one of my earliest KH fic favorites. :)

Honestly, I have no idea how I feel after reading this fic. It's mainly confusion-it's a terrible, horrible mess of thoughts and words and emotions that mix together in my head then end up blank, like when you try to combine a bunch of pretty pigments on your palette and end up with something icky and gross.

But...for some odd reason, I think it's a good thing. I think I like your fic. I think I appreciate the writing. I think I enjoy the confusion you gave me. And I think that this is a good story, despite my inability to understand it.

I guess this is more of an apology to you for not me not comprehending your work, which must surely be an epic form of literature disguised as AkuRoku fiction. Maybe I'm too young or something...I don't know. I'm sorry.

Maybe I should come back after a few years and reread this and see if I would finally completely relate to it. I can sense being somehow connected to the plot, but...I'm just not sure.

I'm sorry.

Just to clarify, you have a wonderful fic here, that much I can tell.

I HATED THIS CHAPTER! Actually this chapter made me stop reading the story... sorry you fault. Ok I'll tell you how my mind works, when i read a akuroku fic i put myself in someones place. Usualy, its Axel. So I kinda feels what Axel feels and i felt like crap. I wanted to fucking kill Kairi! That b*tch! I also wanted to slap Roxas so hard! Man do i fucking hate Kairi. Ugh i really do hate when I'm like this. I only do well with a happy story... And to me this doesn't seem happy. MAN IS KAIRI A FUCKING SLUT! My day kinda just got ruined ... I feel betrayed TT ... sorry for going of on you . Its just UGH . Well I'm going to read a little happy fic before i go to bed... and i truly am sorry for going off on you like that... I'm also sorry for posting this...

I never liked AkuRoku until i read this.

Thank you for making me be the first to read an AkuRoku yaoi fic till the end without gagging.

Truly emotional.

:)

My god. That was... oh my god. What can you say when a person completely realizes every thought and feeling you've ever wanted to express your life? Shit, that sounds so bad, but fuck. You are one amazing character. I feel so much for Axel, really them both, I just don't know what to say about it. I can't thank you enough for writing this. It was so amazing and heartfelt it should've been real. How can you do that? Just write, and have it be so goddamned alive with intensity you don't know what to think?

I don't know. This drags up a lot of personal shit for me. Yeah, I guess you don't care to hear about it. But this thing is so old, and I used to read so much KH fic, and sometimes when I looked at a sentence or phrase there was that deja vu feeling, like there's a time when you can remember sympathizing but it's passed and all you've got left are the half-forgotten memories of intensity.

In short- wow, I cried and 574 reviews will never be enough.

I throw my hands up in the air for you, my dear. I throw everything up in the air, and clap my hands. This is...utterly beautiful. It was confusing. It was amazing. It was mind boggling. It was funny. It was heartfelt. It was bitter. It was sweet. It was bittersweet. It was shocking. It was comprehendible. It was UNconpredendible.

You are one stunning author. The way with your words, it's so, I'm going to repeat, it's so raw, so fucking real.

Your writing style is hilarious, with such a deep meaning. It's the feeling and thought that the readers can understand. My favorite thing in the whole story?

“Shakespeare was clearly on crack when he said that bull about the world being a stage. The world isn’t a fucking stage. Stages mean rehearsals, understudies, props, scripts, and the whole nine yards and let me tell you, there ain’t none of that shit in the real world. The real world is exactly what it is. It’s a giant sphere and you’re standing right on the top of it, trying to keep your balance and trying to get where you need to go without falling off. And there’s shit that blows you over and there’s shit that knocks you down, but the point isn’t that you get knocked down, the point is that you get back up and you keep rolling that fucking metaphorical ball where it needs to go and you get there or you damn well die trying.”

I swallowed this excerpt into my mouth, and rolled it with my tongue one too many times. I said it over and over, word after word. I wrote it on my whiteboard, wrote it on my tumblr, and I'm going to write it on a notecard to carry it around with me at all times. Because THIS, my dear, is the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

It's witty, funny, clever, and so damn true. After writing this on my whiteboard, I went to sleep feeling absolutely AMAZING. You have no idea. I felt like I could conquer the world. And I don't even know how such a passage could make me feel this way. But I think it's because I've played with those words in my mind so many times. But you were able to grasp it in a way I couldn't. And just reading felt so...exhilarating.

You are one amazing author. Kudos to you, baby. This is going in my record book. I want to print it out, and carry this story with me at all times. GOD.3

This chapter. You have no idea how much I wanted to tear this monstrosity of a chapter out, and paste it on every square inch of my room and brain. I quoted this chapter so many times onto my tumblr.

Your writing is so raw, so fucking real. I don't even want to turn to the next chapter, because I can't get over this one. But I must. But god. I can't even comprehend what I'm feeling.

I just want to love you. This was an amazing story, hands down.

Even though I sat at my chair angry with the angst and suspense, because fuck, I wanted things to be fluffy and happy and I think my soul is leaking from my ears, even after all that, it was still great.

When someone says, I'd love to write a story or make a movie that will really make people feel, can share some of the happiness you feel when you see something great, I'm sure we forget that it works both ends of the emotional spectrum. I sure did, at least.

So yeah, this story hurt and made me long for who-knows-what more than anything else. In between all those please-just-kiss and pretend-it-never-happened, there were sly hidden life-lessons told with a quirky sense of humor (god do I love your Axel) and pensive Roxas, whose thoughts and actions still seem somewhat aired in mystery, and an all around confounding look into the lives of stereotypical pop stars. It was all crazy worth it! Thanks.

Omgsh, so when I read this, I thought there was only one chapter. I was very disappointed when I finished reading. BUT THEN I saw 'ch1 of 11.' and I nearly died.

I'm loving this story! I liked how you didn't write 'their lips mashed together an electric shock blah blah' because it gets old reading makeout after makeout scene. Love your writing style :)

-SKF

This has made me realize a few things that I need to get answered. Funny.

Anyways, this is amazingly well written and a beautiful work over all. That about all I can say... ]

This story really struck a chord with me. I think it's amazing how well you portrayed life and the views of the two characters. There were no mistakes, and for once i was reading purely for the middle of the story and not what happened at the end.

This was the most realistic portrayal of life I have ever read. Stunning work.