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| Savvyjewel 2008-08-08 ch 14,  | abuseOMG! i love it! are you going to make a sequel!? pretty please with a giand pile of chololate on top?? lol |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 14, | abuse(jaw drops, then closes again) Wow. Gasp again! In happiness! ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 13, | abuseYay!! |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseGASP! (I hope that showed up with 6 A's!) |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 11, | abuseI LOVE THE ALICE-BOYFRIEND THING!! It was HILARIOUS!! Wow. =D And they finally realized...yay!! ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseGreat, as I'm beginning to find is your usual. =) ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 9, | abuseHey, I like magical hot chocolate...Yeah, anyway: GASP! Again! Good thoughts of each other. On your part, that is. If that made any sense at all... ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 8, | abuseGASP!! ~nabbi PS: Short review... |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 7, | abuseOoh, what is the present? (jumps up and down in anticipation) I like the snoring-and-water-pouring thing. Also how Holly falls asleep and everything with that. Good! XD ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 6, | abuseActually, it was rather rushed. Althought it was good and actually pretty funny. I like how did the whole thing about Holly dressing in those "feminine" pajamas. Hehe! But how are her parents supposed to know she's wearing them? Uhm...Or is that just an honor system kind of thing? ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseOh, okay. He was "dead" for a week. And he's staying with her! (wink) Well, now I can't wait... Okay. I actually don't like Root/Holly, but this one is done quite well. Congrats! =) ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseWait, so Holly never went to Artemis and all of that never happened? And how long was Root "dead"? (Argh! Does the question mark go before or after the quotation mark??) Well, I am rather confused about that...But, other than that, marvelous! (applause) ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 3, | abuseOH GODS!! Is it Root?! |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseGREAT! I like how you made Holl completely angry when Foaly told her what Sool did. Magnificent! Also, I'm going to try and review every chapter. =) ~nabbi |
| artyfangirl316 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abusenice start. makes me want to keep reading, and i will! |