I really liked it. The way you write is very easy to follow.

Ah, the old "Things cant get any worse" trick. It always rains whenever that happen, you notice that?*laughs*

Your sure you wish to use Vaapad? That's a very dangerous form to use, both to the attacker and attacked. Might I recomend Jar'Kai(fighting with two lightsabers) or makashi(Dooku's form)?
Vaapad is dangerous in that the user must place himself or herself in the mindset of a darksider to wield it, and only a handful of Jedi have ever attempted to try it, and all of them were masters, most council members or fallen Jedi. But hey, your story rocks regardless of what you choose.
Yours Truly,
mastercontoro

Oh excellent beginning! I'm rather enthused! I love how you included a character of the same species as Yoda. (I love Yoda!) It's looking great! ^__^