OMG are you ever going to update this? This is pretty good.

this is a great start, you have me wanting to know more and this storyline and your writing leaves me slightly haunted! *grins* update soon!

See, this is the good thing about you having an ffn account -- I can keep tabs on all the stories of yours that I've never read before!

This one is very dark, very chilling. I usually dont go for the "second person"

Great start - looking forward to more!

This really is an interesting story, I look forward to more.

If you have the time, check out my own HP fic =)

This is a wonderful story... I am undoubtedly entraced. I hope you update soon, I would really like to read more. I love the way you word things, and your lovely detail.

~Randa (TC)