Aww, poor Ollette... But you're right, there's not enough of these two. I personally like these two together, it's so... Well, at the risk of sounding like a girl... It's so sweet and cute. :)

Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.

There really aren't enough Yuri stories out there and most not as well done as this one.

Great incorporation of characters and personalities.

You did an excellent job and made it a very interesting read.

I have one word for you: amazing. Your story had depth, and plenty of emotion. Your story is extremily well written, very enjoyable. A beutiful lemon, if I do say so myself. You did an excellent job!

Soooo...I cried. It was amazing. So wonderfully constructed. It was sexy, beautiful, sad, and hopeful all at the same time. Great job! [:

Sexy

DAMN IT! That was so sad... I cried at the end

this was awsome!you got talent,least fot yuri (p.s any GIRLS who liked this you rule more)) guys,you know what i mean(Heh)

this was awsome!you got talent,least fot yuri (p.s any GIRLS who liked this you rule more)) guys,you know what i mean(Heh)

...! thank god(even though he pry doesnt approve of it) for yuri! girl on girlhappy(straight) guys! love the fic (mostly the part with ollete's tounge)

Nothing at all wierd about this piece. I swear I've read it at least ten times before now, I have no clue why I haven't reviewed it yet. I loved everything about it, especially the pairing. I have always been a Kairi fan, since the first game, and since the second, Olette has been my new favorite. Great job, if you do ANYTHING else like this, I want to be there to see it!

This is the best thing Ive ever read. EVER.

Oh my god, that was amazing.

I loved it :D

And now I adore this pairing

OlettexKairi Is LOVE

Thank you so much for this

It was very romantic and real, well put together.

This was awesome.

I love love love Kailette too.

I'm working on my first fanfic ever and it's a Kailette

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Nice. The angst in the beginning was especially well done and really mad me feel bad for Olette. The lemon part was good to. The build up was the better part though, because once they got down to it it felt like you were rushing things. Try to pace your self better next time.

I personally hate sad endings, it sucks that Olette won't remember her. But that doesn't change the fact that it was quite well written.

Oh my god! This story is truely amazing! The end is so sad tho! why did you pull them apart WHY! It was so romantic and emotional.So symbolisitic! Please, write more of these amazing things! Maybe you could write me a InoXSakura story?