 DeengoBlue 2006-08-29 . chapter 1"It was always Aloysius’ fault." -What an awesome and chilling read. You have captured Diogenes remarkably, even terrifyingly. Reading about the teenager and knowing what he is to become--knowing what he is already--and yet seeing the glimpse of the human somewhere inside Diogenes makes it all the more horrifying to behold. I think you have added a depth to the character that I'm not sure even Preston and Child managed. Bravo. |