Reviews for Ash's Letter to Misty

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shadowsaver 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abusethat was so cute. I likes it. alike mean to may but I liked it.
I'll be that girl 2007-10-22 ch 1, anon.	abusesweet idea, but I simply think there were some bad judgment calls in terms of the execution of the story. 1. I know you don't like May, (for the record I don't like her either), but bashing her in a story is downright childish. if you want to bash her, make it subtle so you get the satisfaction and it doesn't wreck the story for the readers. 2. Ash was very out of character. No boy that I know would dare write something so dramatic in a letter. he's clueless, dense, and just a kid. in all honesty I don't think he would be the type to talk bad about anyone except maybe Gary... well anyway, good effort, take these tips into consideration (or don't, but I'm just trying to be helpful). once again valient try, good start, and just a few missed points! bravo!
Storm Midnight 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseYay! I love this story! Are you going to write a sequal or something?
prettygirl17 2007-05-20 ch 1,	abuseSweet! That was awsome! Imagine what Misty's reaction will be! lol.
Unknown 2007-05-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it but what does it have to do with the "A'S" almost every after paragraph?
rebeccasanfujieijilvr 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abusei agree i love that couple ash and misty. i stopped watching pokemon since misty wasn't there anymore four years ago.
Owais Khwaja 2007-01-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow.. This story is awesome! I like it, I really really really want you to continue!! please do so
Christine 2006-12-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it! I've always been rooting for Ash and Misty so this made my night. Can't waite to read the letter to Ash.
Brambleclaws Babe 2006-11-23 ch 1,	abuseSO SWEET! :) :)
missgoflightly 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseOh. My. God. What is with the May bashing? Why does everyone hate May so much? I am a Pokeshipper - if one uses the term 'Pokeshipper' loosely - but mostly because I think it's the only ship that is mildly realistic. But there is nothing wrong with May. Repeat. Nothing wrong with her. And considering May is a female version of Ash, a person who writes a May-bashing fic that praises Ash, has to be a perdy big hypocrite. Secondly, if you hate May because she has come in the way of AAML divinity, think again, because she hasn't. The few episodes which star the trio together shows May ENCOURAGING the relationship. And she is ten for Pete's sake! Surely she has better things to do. Lastly, how old is Ash when he wrote this letter? Surely a teenage boy under fifteen would never write or utter the words 'I LOVE YOU' to a girl. Or at least Ash wouldn't. And may I add that the song you have inserted in this story is basically a big waste of space. It has little relation to the actual fic.
miskomoto 2006-08-27 ch 1, anon.	abusemake it so there is a chapter where you are talking about misty getting the letter ash just wrote in chapter 1. also make it so may is jeaslous of misty .
DUUUUUUUDE 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon.	abusegrait job im not a fan of may bashing (must resist urg to) but stll exalent job
Wickedrulezmyworld 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw. I just love fluffy fics like this! Please make some more!
Lazy Mew 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abuseAww...so romantic...hehehehe, Ash and Misty are very good as a couple^_^ I luv da poem (isn't that a poem-the part that has bold letters?) ow I wish I can write a poem like that! Good story...! And I wonder why everyone calls May as a moron (I havn't watched Hoenn anime version so I dunno her) but if she luves Ash, I can understand y every Ash-Misty fans will hate her. =3
Guitarprincess 2006-07-14 ch 1,	abuseAww. This was such a great story. I loved all the May bashing. It was just the right amount of fluff. Can't wait to see Misty's letter. GREAT JOB! Ash and Misty forever!

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