please update *gives puppy dog face*

You know who they remind me of? Draco, Blaise, Crabbe and Goyle from Harry Potter lol.

Sorry it took me so long to R&R

One question... Did they even use the word gentleman back then?

But anyway, OH MY GOODNESS. Can he befriend her, fall in love with her, and save her from those evil guys? :D

oh i love this! update!

Joren said GAL! LOL. Sorry I thought it was funny. Well I'm glad you finally decided to update. LOL. Now update again. LOL.

Sarah

nod bad... very gd story and ur descriptions arent that bad. cant wait to see what happens.. so update!

interesting...gentlemen what crap lol. KILL THEM ALL

flame me if needed but this is reminding me of 'league of extraordinary gentlemen'

CONTINUE! PLLEEASE?

i have one thing to say to you HOW DARE U STOP! MORE! MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! u get the idea so anyway pls send me a msn request wana tlk 2 u more i wanna kno more bout y u chose to do joren and kel flick anyway heres my addy

ya you better keep going...lol..

Oh, I love Joren in FanFiction. He gives Kel passion that Dom couldn't give her, and if Cleon gave it to her I might throw up. LOL. And Neal, is like incest. LOL. But I don't like Joren in the books, just FanFiction. So please keep going. Update soon.

Sarah

I like this story a lot. i hope you write more like this.

Ok, so I'm finally reviewing someone, after a couple of years of being a shadow...maybe I'll register next, who knows.

Continue with this story. You're off to a good start, it's much more original than some other JK fics I've read. I love JK fics, but hate Joren in the books, go figure.

Lol no flames. I just love Joren Kel fics. There you go, ill get flames now too.

Update soon :)