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Reviews for: Loose Ends
aiRo25
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Simply gorgeous as it was the first time I read it (had computer problems and hadn't been back to round out the reviews). I absolutely love this fic and your writing.
fourpawsonthefloor
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Very well written and poignant! I enjoyed it very much.
tarnishedgold
2006-07-03 . chapter 1
This was well done especially for a ROMY fan. ^_^ They happen to be my favorite couple as well so I understand your pause in posting a story that doesn't bash Bella. Personally I think that either way can be done well and I liked how you portrayed her in this piece.
ishandahalf
2006-07-01 . chapter 1
very nice... it's rare that you see belle portrayed sympathetically, especially since she is a huge antagonist for the romy relationship, but this was really well done. i actually felt bad for her... but then my inner romy lover tried very hard to suppress that feeling. ;)
MidniteAngelGoth
2006-07-01 . chapter 1
golly gee dang. that was a good story. never was one for creepy-stalker-killing bella. but nice transition into her crying. nice job!
gambits girl
2006-07-01 . chapter 1
FINALLY! WE HAVE A REMY STORY WITH BELLE THAT MAKES SENSE! WO! I CONGRADULATE YOU!
GothikStrawberry
2006-07-01 . chapter 1
Poor Bella ... Gambit really wasn't very nice to her was he?

Anyway, nice one-shot! :)
BlkDiamond
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
I must admit I really liked the way you did Bella in this story, hard but with a human side. Please do more.
Green Amber
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
Well, I see that somebody was very busy after abandoning me at work. Do you know how many times I called your cell phone to tell you that you forgot me? Do you? Anyway, I got your note, and I still love you, although you're now going to have to buy me a very nice birthday present, you hear?

Ah, this makes me really happy. I love how you've made Bella an actual character here with emotions just like the rest of us. It's just so different from the picture that's been painted of her by so many authors. (I had a lot of fun reading the part where she kept smacking Remy's head with her gun. Woot.) Another thing that I really loved was how in the end, it was she who tossed Remy out of her life, instead of the other way around. I think that I would do the exact same thing in her position, and I loved how you used the wedding ring. My heart really went out to Bella in this piece, and I felt so sorry for her and also so proud of her as well. You've shown both her vulunerability here and her inner strength. Great work. And your dialogue is definitely improving. Hazzah!

Love you,

Countess.

P.S. Thanks for pimping me out. It made me feel so special and yet so dirty at the same time. 0_~
Mystikat
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
This... is probably the most satisfying take on Bella I've ever read. And it's about her, not about what she is to Remy, which I don't think I've seen before. Bravo.
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