Another saga I enjoyed very much. I liked the way Verto saved everyone from the virus. Very glorious. :-D

ahahahaha I love the power levels at the end...


"Gohan: Does it matter?" LOL You're the funniest :-D

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I've been a silent fan of yours for several years. I also thought that self-insert would be ridiculous in the beginning, but you proved me wrong. :)

I know you wrote this piece a long time ago, so you already be aware of what I am about to write to you... but I wanted to comment on the sentence way up top:

“Is it agreed then?” one asked, sounding quite elderly but also wise.

"sounding quite elderly, but also wise" to be exact.

I'm not seeing this combo go good together, especially with the sentence construction (not wrong, just has an unnatural feeling to it) If half feels cliche, and half feels too obvious. An elderly person is usually always wise in this situation, (although not really always, but I think you know what I mean)

I'll give you an example, from which you can make a better sentence, or even take the whole sentence.

"Is it agreed then?" an elderly one said, his voice exuding wisdom.

Please don't take my critique the wrong way; I'm a fan. :)

Great idea with SS2, keep up the good work!

great fight, wonderful story

Well, I finished up this saga, now moving on to the next. I remember some of what happened in the 7th. LIke your interesting choice of villians. I'll be all the way caught up again soon so keep pounding out the chapters please.

Well, I'm finally starting part 6... again. Lost interest during 7 because I totally forgot the background and pretty much who verto was about a year ago, so I decided to start over. It's funny how I start remembering how things unfold while reading it. I hope you keep pounding out updates to 7, because I'm fast catching up.

I also starting play Starcraft again during the last two installments. I havn't finished the expansion yet so I can't remember what happens to kerrigan. Will she be making any more appearances in the future?

I'm also wondering about Uub, I can't remember exactly when he appeared in the DBZ timeline, but he is a character that you have plans with? Is he gonna have the mystic power too?

Series 6 re-reading... 5th was awesome¡

well i just finished saga 6 and i must say, beatiful. The battles, the characters and just the overall plot, it was possibly my favorite saga so far and im looking forward to reading saga 7 in a few minutes, only problem with that is that that i will then have to wait between chapters :(

Ok first of all I'm sorry I haven't reviewed prior to this. But I was so into the story that I kept forgetting to.

I really love all the Sagas, the concept and the character Verto. :)

The Zerg Sagas made me want to play the game again, it's been so long. :)

I haven't played Diablo 2 in years so didn't get the whole Kaa thing, but I loved it all the same. :)

Anyway I've got to go read Saga 7 now, then maybe I can get back to writing my own stories!

Keep it up!

SSJG

AWESOME I LOVE YUOR STORY IVE READ FROM THE BEGINING 2 HALF THROUGH 6 AND NOW I HAF TO READ THE REST OF IT AND CATCH UP BECAUSE I HAVENT BEEN ON IN AWHILE BUT RIGHT NOW ITS 9:57 ANDTHE CHAPTERS ARE REAL LONG AND IM TIRED SO ILL FINISH TOMMORW! (^_^) YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT GREAT GREAT! KUTGW(KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Hey, would just like to thank you for giving me such a terrific story to read. I actually started reading this on Majin Planet, it was like one of the first fanfics I ever read but even now, it's still my favourite. If you hadn't have mentioned this site on Majin Planet, I would never have found it and got the inspiration to start writing myself, so, thank's alot, and can't wait till Saga 7's up, bye!

I enjoy all your stories and I am very glad you character is not much of a Gary-Stu. Please write more and I will review as much as I can.

~Tanya Adams 64

sorry i haven't reviewed in a while...haven't really read in a while either

Great ending to a great story! I have read the series from the beginning and loved every chapter of it. I even had your updates on chapters E-mailed to me because I was so interested in when the next chapter would be coming out. I cannot wait for series 7 :-D