I liked how she kept bringing up her parent's criticisms. I'm not a big fan of song fic, and I thought it took your story and made it too blatant (the lyrics), but disregarding that, I enjoyed it.

Amazing, love it!.

Wonderful.

Hot hot hot. I like it.

;) I loved this. There's probably something wrong with me, but I was laughing my butt off when Sakura was talking and all Kakashi saw was HER in general. XDDD But I thought that was sweet too.

IT'S THE CLASSIC "YOU LOOK SO BEAUTIFUL WHEN YOU'RE MAD" THING!

Only, Kakashi didn't SAY it. He SHOWED it to her. And showered her with hawt sex. ;D

.:blushes:. Woow..(.;faints from massive nosebleed;.)

Awww That was beautifulllllll! - Totally made my day Lol. Awesome lemon! Keep up the great work! :DDDDDD

Nicely fict! Lol. Cool!

Awsome!

First thing. While a song may be your inspiration putting it in the middle of the story is jarring and distracting for me. Second lied is the past tense term for lie as 'he lied'. The past tense verb for lay is laid. Finally I understand not have a beta for your writing but you should read over your own work several times slowly to make sure everything you've written makes sense to you. If something you've written doesn't sound written to you find a way of putting it that does sound correct to you.

Okay now that the constructive criticism part is finished with I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this little lemon! I very much like that you explain how the Kakashi and Sakura ended up married. Bonus points for Sakura getting Tsunade to teach her by evoking feminine pride! I also love the part about Kakashi getting some (hopefully) minor injuries on purpose so he can get her mad at him. Does Sakura still go on mission outside the village or is she strictly a village security jonin?

hello i just wanted to tell you that your story "when you're mad was funny. and it shows how bad kakashi has it when he loves his wife mad. but i have a comment to make your name is miss artemis would this be the same goddess in the greak myths the one of the hunt, child birth, and of virgens. if so i think that it is very ironic. well keep up the good work i love to hear if you right anymore stories.

i liked it angry sex can be very hot sex lol good job with your first lemon and all!

total nosebleed!

It was great

that story was a good story! even though it was a one-shot it was good...by the way im lunara...lol im new here...weite me bac if u wanna