interesting stuff.

Lol! as far as chapters go, i've read weirder!

like the 2nd chapter. little bit of info, little bit of intrigue, little bit of history- all good:)

keep going? please? :P xx

good stuff. i hope u carry on with it. there's a lot of potential here.

nice opening, well laid out, and well written.

keep going! xx

Very intersting beggining .. I hope you write more!