Oh the anticipation!! Tell me please? lol! This is a really nice idea- but unsatisfying until complete, I feel! Lovely characterisation; you can really *hear* Sev's voice.

All the best,

Es

xx

Delightfully deceptive! I like your understated dialogue and the fact that so much is left to the reader's imagination. I love how brave and confident Hermione is here too.

m... more?

gaah!! :D (

:D

FUN!

Oh that's quite clever. These are really well done. Short, just dialogue, and a perfect pair of plot twists. Excellent. Thanks for sharing.

aaww. its so cute and fluffy. Can I take it home with me?

funny love it dont quit wrighting.

Ruby

Great! The first one took me a moment of thinking. Very funny.
Yours,
Meta

That sounds like it's not really the truth. They're on friendly but not romantic terms (or why would her thinking need to be "wishful"?), perhaps working together on some secret of Dumbledore's.

Hehehe~! Very amusing. Nice little riff off all the SS and HG fics out there...and you can take it any way you want. Lovely.

heehee! That was cute.

*purr* :D Lovely. *smirks*

HAHA! Their faces when they learn that its the truth!! Ha... a very good hr/sev fic!! Keep up the good work!!