Definitely some good irony.

I LOVE the part about little Draco drawing the Dark Mark on his arm- it struck me as cute... although I dunno, maybe it shouldn't have.

And, anyways, good story!

i love Draco stories!

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I really really liked that. Draco was just right: the desperation, the unnoticed change from wanting to do it to having to do it. Great work. I'm off to read your others.

I really really enjoyed that. It was... profound. I absolutely love the way it ends how it started, only in reverse: his desire is now his fear and all that. The emotions he felt were also realistic. He's not innocent, but he's no longer evil.

Loved it.

Wow, that was really, really good... I don't know what else to say.