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| Xi Theta 2008-08-17 ch 4, | abuseIs this Rit-chan? Wow, that i can imagine ... |
| S. Whiner 2008-08-07 ch 3, | abuseNot bad at all. All characters in character, grammar and spelling good for the most part. I enjoyed it. |
| Kyoru-KiTTy-ArTist 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* KYO-KUN! U CAN COME TO ME! STUPID TOHRU! DANG U YUKI! *SOB SOB* KYO SO SAD... KKL~ |
| Adi88 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuse(FINALLY! IT'S FINALLY LETTING ME REVIEW!) This is really... really... really good. Incredible, actually. Each mini-chapter had a bit that I wish there was room and time here to quote, because they are beautiful quotes. Some grammer/spelling/sentence structure mistakes, but they are crying because they're so alone... Again, very good. Everyone was so in-character, but you made the plot very much your own. Beautiful angst. And... Hiro... uh-oh. |
| MegaRose 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseah love this. The diffrent P.O.V's normaly anoy me when they;re done like this but in this case I loved them because they were so well written. I though Yuki not having one sort of fit for some reason...maybe beacuse he had nothing to worry about or was totaly blissful? Kyo's a Tohrus made me cry... I love that in a story. Please Please Please continue! |
| Haru-Hatori-Hiro 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow |