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| Secret Thought 2007-04-02 ch 2,  | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. |
| neb92 2007-02-17 ch 2, | abuseAw... Im sorry, I just watched Bridge to Terabithia, and cried. Hard. And my eyes are trying to glue themselves shut. |
| smudgeworthy 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! I love the whole, Piper loving Chris, thing. You're right, there wasn't enough bonding between those two. I'm going to your homepage right now to see your other stories! This was great... xoxo Tasha |
| moony391 2006-08-30 ch 2, | abuseThis was really good, and I like the lyrics at the end. I'm off to read the others. |
| Anime Freak Inc. 2006-08-26 ch 2, | abuseOMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDTAE YOU HAVE BEEN ADDED THIS IS SUCH A CUTE STORY |
| aerohead1980 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abuseThis was wonderful. I completely agree with you. They didn't give enough time in the show for Chris to develop closer relationships with his family. |
| E 2006-08-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseI jsut read the two chapters and have to say that they were brilliant. I loved how you put in Chris and Piper's musings as they watched each ohter. It actually made me cry because you're right, we didn't really get to see lots of mother/son bonding moments considering from where he came from. Actually, I thought that they left a lot about Chris and his story arc unresolved but that's for another time. I just noticed one or two typos that you go over and reread to correct and yes, American kids call their moms 'mom', not 'mum' but that's it really. It was a great story, I loved it. |
| Nina430 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseI just finished reading both chapters and I have to say that you did a great job. I loved the idea of sunshine rain. I loved the way you wrote Chris and Piper's thoughts. :) |
| pmsdevil01 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseaw that was sweet |
| Lynx Silverhawk 2006-08-03 ch 2, | abuseThis was really good and really sweet! i love how you wrote Piper and Chris' relationship! It's going on my favorites! |
| Kiwi - Sprog 2006-07-12 ch 2, | abuseFantastic story, I love how you got Piper and Chris to bond. I look forward to reading your other stories. |
| Touch of the Wind 2006-07-11 ch 2, | abuseSweet! |
| CharmedForLifeof2007 2006-07-11 ch 2, | abuseI love this story! It almost made me cry and thats a good thing!! Keep up the good work!! |
| Jay 2006-07-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery cute and I like seeing Chris and Piper bonding. The only problem with it is that American kids call their mothers 'Mom' and not 'Mum'. But still a great story and I cannot wait to read more, |
| Spuffyshipper 2006-07-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood chapter.Update soon. |