 KrisEleven 2008-11-15 . chapter 1So cute! I really liked it. Excellent writing, just make sure to read it over before you post because a couple of the words were jumbled together.
I liked your Jason alot, especially how you capitalized things that were important to him, into titles. That was adorable.
KrisEleven~ |
 Wahoogal06 2007-06-23 . chapter 1Darth Stitch, you need to know something.
First off, I discovered your fic several months ago in a thread over on You don't know how it affected me. You captured Jason's point of view so well; you just got into the head of a five year old and pulled it off brilliantly. Not to mention the ending, it tugged at my heartstrings! I could absolutely see that happening at the Daily Planet, and...
...oh heck, I'm just going to say what everyone else has already told you. It's so darn CUTE!
So thank you for sharing this story with all of us. It really is great, and I hope they can sneak in a moment or two like it in the next Superman movie =) |
 Hannahbee 2007-04-17 . chapter 1Oh, how I love your fic. You had me hooked with the very first line and there was no way I could turn away. And what a treasure it turned out to be!
Not only do we get an insight into Jason’s mind, it really felt like he was telling the story. And before I quote everything, I think I better stick to only one of my favorite lines:
Mum and Daddy worked in the Borg Room (why a room should be named that way when there were no Borgs from the Star Trek show in there, Jason could never understand).
You had me *rotfl* with this one. Tho it still doesn’t compare to those touching scenes between Jason and Clark. Simply adorable and deep!
…he once caught Jason in his arms when Jason put on a red blanket and jumped off the desk, yelling, "Look, Mister Clark, I'm SUPERMAN!"
It was a good thing Mum or Daddy hadn't seen him do that or he'd be in Big Trouble, for sure.
Mister Clark laughed and said "Golly, I didn't recognize you, Superman. You must have been in disguise!"
"Sh!" Jason shushed him. "That's a secret!"
Mister Clark nodded gravely. "It's okay. I'll never tell."
Jason beamed at him.
And then it comes full circle.
Then, he took a step forward and tripped over something and his glasses fell to the floor.
Mister Clark could be really clumsy sometimes, just like Jason was.
Jason ran and picked up the glasses and said, "Here you go, Mister Clark." He had to look way, way, way up because Mister Clark - well, Superman, was really big and Jason was still little. When he was grown up, Jason decided, he was going to be as tall as Superman.
Superman knelt down so Jason could see him properly and he was pale and Jason thought again how odd it was to see Superman in Daddy-kind of clothes instead of his superhero suit. "Th-thank you, Jason."
And then Jason remembered that Superman was supposed to be in disguise so he went forward, tiptoed and whispered into Superman's ear, "It's okay. I'll never tell."
Gosh, you really do know how to turn people into complete mush. Super!
And even tho the ending is a cliffie, there’s no better way (at least I can’t imagine one) to end this fic.
Mister Clark waved back and although Jason was already too far away to hear, he thought he heard Superman whisper, "Good night, son."
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Love, Hannahbee
PS: Hope you don’t mind if I put you on the SR fic rec list I’m planning? |